100moods Challenge - Lonely

[zakai_]

Title: Lonely
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairings: Roy/Ed, mentions of past Hughes/Roy
Prompt: Lonely
Word Count: 1,352
Rating: PG13
Warnings/Spoilers: None
Summary: Everyone gets lonely every once in a while, even Roy Mustang.

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Comments

[magicsfiend]

akjfhd Poor Roy. ;~; I felt so bad for him. Stupid Ed.

This made me so damned lonely too!

Lovely read though. Thanks for writing! ♥

[zakai_]

Yeah, I felt bad for him too :(

[penguinetta57]

Poor poooooor Roy!
Gah, I felt so bad for him! His reasons for feeling distraught were so human, and the reasons that Ed was... oblivious made this terribly sad sort of sense. Aw, man... I think this just made my personal canon a lot sadder as far as Roy/Ed goes.

On a cynical note, it's nice to see Roy being legitimately the one getting the short end of the stick in this relationship, though I feel really REALLY bad for him.

I loved it! You made Roy seem so fragile on the inside, but still very Roy Mustang on the outside.

[zakai_]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. *nods* I can understand what you mean about Roy finally legitimately getting the short end of the stick. That doesn't seem to happen very often in fanfic, that I've seen.

[kookiety]

Waaaahhh.

Sniffle.

Lovely fickie... But oh so sad.

Can't even blame Ed, really. Sigh. Poor Roy *pets him*

[zakai_]

Yeah, Ed is just oblivious. Poor Roy. :(

[snarry_fan7]

Poor Roy (I feel like an echo saying that, lol). I definitely understand how Roy feels being so alone and what not. Really excellent work!~Sophia

[zakai_]

Thanks! <3

[dragonimp]

Someone needs to smack Ed upside the head D:. Though it sounds like Roy is hurting in more areas than romance.

[zakai_]

*nods* I think you're right.