Drabble: Inversion

[zakai_]

Title: Inversion
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Rating: R
Type: Yaoi, Drabble, General
Pairing: Roy/Ed
Word Count: 474
Summary: It wasn't something they had meant to happen; never should have happened...

Inversion

It wasn’t something they had meant to happen; never should have happened.  The late night meeting on the deserted street was unexpected and the

Comments

[elegantpaws]

"beautiful"

[zakai_]

Thanks ^_^

[sapphyre_kikyo]

Holy. Crap. That was amazing. I <3 you so much because this was simply amazing.

[zakai_]

Thanks <3

[mustanginblue]

Very nice, hot sex with a promise of a future together. I like! This line was particularly interesting "But the illicitness brought an attraction to one, and the other had indulged in too many taboos to concern himself with the consciences." because the first part could describe Roy or Ed and the second part could describe either of them as well. (ummmm did you mean 'consequences' though?)

[zakai_]

haha you're right. It is supposed to be consequences... ^ ^; *goes to fix* <3

[fritz42]

I know I commented on this story on ff.net, but I still had to make one here, too. I am still in awe of this wonderful writing and the imagery it entails. The emotional depth in such few words is truly a work of art.

"T"

[zakai_]

awww thank you ^_^ I'm very happy you like it.

[dragonimp]

Ooh, lovely. Very etherial.

[zakai_]

Thank you ^_^