Crocodile

[whiteadelphi]

All in all, it had been a rather unproductive morning.

The street was a mess.  The lanterns had come down entirely now, torn apart and crunched underfoot by rioters.  It had been a riot, in the end - far outstripping the earlier fighting, the chaos had encompassed the entirety of the street and begun spilling over into other blocks.  Kamiya Kaoru’s

Comments

[whiteadelphi]

Oy...this scene gave me HELL ON EARTH, I tell you. Therefore, I apologise if it's not up to scratch.

It's currently 2am, and I'm throwing this up so I can go to bed and get up for work in six hours. :3 I'll come and reply to comments tomorrow. Thank you for being so patient!

[bakazaru7]

::happy dance:: You're back! And updating Zaibatsu! ::dances more:: I love Soujiro to pieces, and your characterisation of him is brilliant! I can't wait for more!

[whiteadelphi]

Belated thank you. :D I'm now back and writing so hopefully you'll continue to enjoy the story. ^^

[scarreddragon]

A conversation in smiles. But way for Soujirou to hit a low blow on that death comment. At the same time, clever. Hmm... looking forward to the next bit!

[whiteadelphi]

Hhyeah, Kenshin's not too happy about the uh ...fatal side of his makeshift planning. >_>

Belated thank you! ^^

[jazmin_firewing]

YAY! An update!
Also, I love Soujirou. He made my entire day today: "“That man,” he said blissfully, “Is lying.”

[whiteadelphi]

Belated thank you! :D Hope you continue to enjoy. ^^

[zig_zag123]

^_^ I love this, but you already know it. But to state again I really like that you focused on their eyes instead of over discribing their smiles like most authors would do. Good job!

[whiteadelphi]

I think I'd have gone crazy using the word "smile" every four seconds. XD XD *hugs*