Sometimes

Aug 05, 2011 13:51

Title: Sometimes
Pairing: Ginny/Luna
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 742
Summary: Your mouth tasted of peppermint and your hair smelled like honeysuckle and your skin, so soft and delectable, would move against mine in ways that we often forgot were so wonderful.

Sometimes it seemed like you were always sleeping. )

fanfiction, pairing: ginny/luna, harry potter

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zagury August 5 2011, 20:29:31 UTC
I've been feeling rather... fluffy lately, so this works :)

Thanks! It feels good to write every now and again.

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zofbadfaith August 6 2011, 02:08:46 UTC
Sooo... I promised a long comment, so lemme think in everything I can write here xD

First of all, I'm very happy to see you writing. I'm even happier to see you writing AND liking what you're writing.

This sorta feels like... old-you-writing. I don't mean this in a bad way AT ALL, you know I think you're a very gifted writer, but this feels like... I can feel this, you know? The caring, I can feel it.

And I can feel (because I'm weird like that) your satisfaction in finishing and liking this, because you were struggling so much with liking the things you were writing (even when they were super good), and it's good to see this.

It's pretty much miraculous, you know.

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zagury August 6 2011, 05:02:08 UTC
it didn't have to be long xP i just like your comments :3

me gusta writing

hmmm. old-me-writing? you mean like the stuff i used to write in letters? or like two summers ago me? i'm confused haha. it's funny 'cause the stuff where you can feel the caring is actual caring, 'cause, you know. the emotions are there. except this one is actually fictional.

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zofbadfaith August 6 2011, 20:48:53 UTC
Old-you-writing like two summer ago old-you. It's just... really heartfelt, you know? Even if it's fictional, the emotions are there.

I don't know xP

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jailbaitjello August 6 2011, 06:17:44 UTC
I wasn't going to read this because it was Ginny/Luna, and I usually feel kind of apathetic to anyone who isn't Hermione, but I'm so glad I did! Because I would have missed out on some seriously beautiful writing style if I hadn't.

And yes, the tenderness and caring clearly permeate this whole piece, and I love it.

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zagury August 7 2011, 05:41:12 UTC
I'm glad you chose to read it and I'm even more glad that you enjoyed it! Ginny/Luna is quite obviously my favorite femmeslash pairing in existence :)

Thank you thank you thank you

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giddymorose August 6 2011, 12:37:04 UTC
So sweet and lovely and just how I imagine their domesticity. :D

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zagury August 7 2011, 05:41:39 UTC
Thank you! :D

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bewarethesmirk August 6 2011, 23:59:32 UTC
Breathtaking in its beauty and tenderness. I love the quiet and easy dynamic, like Ginny and Luna are all that matters, and the world around them is just a landscape.

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zagury August 7 2011, 05:42:07 UTC
Such a wonderful way to put it. I'm so glad you liked it!

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