Moments

Jul 11, 2011 21:18

Title: Moments
Pairing: Multiple
Rating: G
Word Count: 980
Summary: "Heavy pockets never measure what carries weight and lasts forever." - Donovan Lyman
Note: I wrote this and then received a little message from the person I had in mind that really just... you know? Anyway, I hope you like this.  In my opinion, it's rather horrid, but I hope you manage ( Read more... )

pairing: any

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lash_larue July 12 2011, 02:27:15 UTC
God damn.

That is one of the most beautifully painful things I have ever read.

I can't say anything more.
L

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zagury July 13 2011, 01:45:08 UTC
<3 I was reading some old comments you left me and I realized that all of my writing gives you this general reaction. So, sorry? Haha

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lash_larue July 13 2011, 13:26:42 UTC
That's okay, kind of proves I'm not dead.

It can't all be pr0n.
L

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zagury July 14 2011, 02:58:12 UTC
If that's not the funniest comment I've seen, I don't know what is.

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loonynamelass July 12 2011, 04:28:23 UTC
Oh my... Very powerful, though.

My only criticism might be that it's not immediately clear why this drabble applies to Harry and Ginny and not just any couple in the series or out.

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zagury July 13 2011, 01:45:35 UTC
Thanks! I appreciate the criticism, feel free to offer me any :)

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crimsonshiver July 13 2011, 19:56:03 UTC
I really love this ♥

Mostly because it's painful... love hurts like hell.

I would love to read more of your writing - would you add me? :)

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zagury July 14 2011, 02:55:52 UTC
I'm really glad you enjoyed it! (love sucks)

Sure, I would be happy to add you :)

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defyingsanity July 16 2011, 11:37:54 UTC
Gasp. This is utterly beautiful. Damn, you don't write often enough. <3

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prunesquallormd July 24 2011, 16:34:46 UTC
:'(

I don't think it's horrid, not at all. Achingly sad, certainly, but lovely too, and very real. I think most of us have been in a similar situation. I know I have, and I think maybe you wrote it from experience, which makes me even more sad.

Just beautiful, really, as always :)
I'm just sorry I'm so late commenting!

(It's always lovely to see you update on here, you do so so rarely these days!).

I've been trying to get up the energy to reply to your email all day! Gonna try and do that now :)

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