Paper Doll

Aug 23, 2009 10:13


Title: Paper Doll
Characters, Pairings: Lily Luna, very mild Ginny/Luna
Rating: G
Word Count: ~4600
Prompt: 'Paper Doll' by Rachael Yamagata
Summary: What happened to my little girl with dirt on her knees?
Note: For zofbadfaith  :)

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lily luna, fanfiction, gen fic

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zofbadfaith August 23 2009, 19:26:45 UTC
*hugs you and the fic and never lets go*
<3 <3 <3 <3
I'd fill the rest of the page with hearts, I swear. :3 *hugsqueeeeeeeeeeezes*

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zagury August 23 2009, 21:28:35 UTC
<3 <3
haha, I bet you could :D *hugsqueeeeeze*

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lucianwolf August 23 2009, 20:31:03 UTC
This is beautiful.

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zagury August 23 2009, 21:32:50 UTC
Thank you!

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eeyore9990 August 23 2009, 23:00:10 UTC
Heh, tug at my heart strings a little harder, why don't you? *sniffle* That was beautiful.

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zagury August 23 2009, 23:35:59 UTC
I wouldn't dream of it. *snuggles you* Thank you so much!

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meggygurl August 24 2009, 08:12:00 UTC
Oh my god, that was amazing. *sniffles*

I never read any next gen HP fic... but this was amazing. Guh. And I love that Ginny and Harry are still close even if they are not together anymore. Though I do want to know what happened!

Lovely!

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zagury August 24 2009, 19:11:52 UTC
*cuddles you*

I've only read nextgen that's here and there, but when I read the lyrics to 'Paper Doll' it only made sense to write nextgen. I could've done it Molly/Ginny wise but this situation wouldn't have done well with Ginny, and I've never tried writing Lily. I'm not exactly sure what happened between Harry and Ginny, ha, it's just that Zee doesn't really like het and we're both big fans of the Ginny/Luna ship so that just clicked too.

Thank you so much! *squeezes*

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corchen August 24 2009, 09:45:27 UTC
Lovely. I can't think of any ways this could be sweeter - and I love how wonderfully understated everything is - you don't belabour any points, you've got that happy knack of explaining everything just enough, but not so much that the story becomes cumbersome. Delicious!

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zagury August 24 2009, 19:17:35 UTC
Thank you so much! I think that it was easier to leave things up to the imagination of the reader. Going into a long explanation of how Harry and Ginny came to separate would be a waste of words and no one really wants to read about it anyway. Thanks again!

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