100-word Drabble - Merlin

May 31, 2010 12:57

Title: Watching
Author: Zafra
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Angst
Summary: Merlin watches Arthur with someone else.
My beta, the lovely cold_poet gave this a read-over, the thumbs up and told me it broke her heart. I guess that's the best I can ask for. *eg ( Read more... )

drabble, merlin, fanfic

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zafra May 31 2010, 21:50:34 UTC
Thank you for reading! I know, I hate to abuse the poor boy like that, but what can I say? The picture in my mind was so *vivid* it just had to come out on 'paper', as it were. :(

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themostepotente May 31 2010, 19:19:16 UTC
Lovely but sad ♥

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zafra May 31 2010, 21:46:40 UTC
I know. Where was my head this morning?! ;-) Thanks for reading!

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zafra May 31 2010, 21:44:56 UTC
Thank you for clicking on it! I'm sorry I broke your heart but yeah, I agree. I broke my own heart writing it. :(

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zafra June 1 2010, 01:16:27 UTC
*Hugs you* I feel like I just hold a group hug for my whole flist, yeah? :-) Thanks for reading and commenting.

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zafra June 1 2010, 02:32:41 UTC
Yeah, I know. And even worse... in my mind when I *saw* the scene I saw him actually having *had* it and now no longer, for whatever reason. So, I'm a *double* bitch. :-) Muahahaha.
Evidently coupled with the longer fic I'm writing for a kink_me prompt, I'm in full-on *kick Merlin* mode, today. *takes him out and pets him a bit*

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shutupeccles June 1 2010, 00:33:30 UTC
so did I
heartless bastard
poignantly horrid, jolly well done!

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zafra June 1 2010, 01:17:44 UTC
urm, thanks? ;-) Every once in awhile we have to remind folks that this isn't an entirely shiny-magical-creatures-and-rainbows fandom. At least I feel that way I suppose!

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shutupeccles June 1 2010, 10:45:06 UTC
i concur, Arthur's the heartless bastard by the way, not you...in case you felt unloved...which you shouldn't. i loved it

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zafra June 1 2010, 14:53:18 UTC
Ha, yes he is a heartless bastard isn't he? Making me see such horrible things in my head. ;-)

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