NaruSasu Oneshot series (Nothing Left03)

[zaccheo]

{NaruSasu) Nothing Left - Part 03

*blinks* oh my, I've been totally out of the intarhnet web for ummm several days (almost a week, actually. I just peeked here on my last post) and it feels so.... weird. I'll be posting this out now, and will be back umm... 6 hours later? I dont know. Still have to finish something. My betas (or rather, my beta

Comments

[rinnychan]

I liked them very much, you made a lot of good connections in there! I think that for future fics it would be a good idea to get a beta though. It was a little difficult to enjoy it as I wanted to because the grammar was off a lot.

[zaccheo]

*winces*

yeah I know, and thanks for pointing that out. Its just my beta is kind of absent and will be back more or less in a month. so i think i will just announce this once its been corrected ^^

[rinnychan]

O_O! *is sorry*

[zaccheo]

aw, there's nothing to be sorry about ^^ :D i should be because of my repulsing grammar. guh.

I'M BACK! AND I LOVES YOU STILL! ^_^

[rainbowfragment]

I love you. I missed you so much in Germany. And even though I read this a little late, I believe it was the perfect time for it... it really kind of uplifted my spirits from a lot of shit that has been going on. How are you though? And did you need this beta-ed? I can make sure to do that. ^_^

Lovies,
Shinigami Twin 04
(Quatre Raberba Winner)

Re: I'M BACK! AND I LOVES YOU STILL! ^_^

[zaccheo]

Okaeri, Hisashiburi desu.

Waii, I missed ya too. Heheh, nothing like going back to your love, ne? *flourishes the NaruSasu fic. I'm glad and I dont need to ask you if you like it, it sure did something for ya, hehe. Am kind of fine, I've been lurking for more than a week in the net but I'm getting back slowly. Heheh. And yeah, beta puhlease.

And hey... which one of the two endings do you like the most? I'm thinking of posting it at FF.net and I have not decided on which of of them I'll post there.

Re: I'M BACK! AND I LOVES YOU STILL! ^_^

[rainbowfragment]

Oh... so I was correct. I have seen this again indeed. So... now just to get Hee-chan and on with the editing. I'll alert her to that little fact. Gomen nasai we hadn't already done it. Won't probably till tomorrow. (or maybe even the day after, promise not to keep you waiting too long, just a lot has been going on and I'm all out of whack etc. You know the drill.) So, get back to this later. And yes, no worries, tis good. And which ending I prefer... um... let me think on that. I really don't know... I mean... I like them both. But for different reasons. I am more partial I believe to the later,... but that could be current mood influencing my judgement. But I also find that the last one has the perk of bringing out how I truly view how Sasuke works on the inside. And the first one... well that one had the advantage of clearly stating how important Naruto is to Sasuke, and I love that. Basically, both have their advantages. I don't note weaknesses yet... probably none since they are your beautiful works after all! ^_~ So... let me

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[zaccheo]

Hmm... I can't decide yet on which to post on FF.net. What do you think. I do agree with you that they have different points of their own.

[senrei_yume]

*thawk-age* Why isn't this on your fanfiction account? I would so favorite it! Yay for angsty/confused/detached/needs a hug Sasuke! I think I liked the second ending better. More emotional and deeper, methinks, but the first one was sweet too.
By the way, this is Streetwise. On my rarely used LJ account. I'm not even sure why I HAVE one. I never post anything. -shrug-
I think that little note on how Sasuke thinks of everyone is true... But I still have a soft spot for KakaSasu. NaruSasu is still my favorite, though.
So I'm finished rambling, and I should go to sleep now...

[zaccheo]

LOL actually, the reason why this is not in my FF account is that I'm still torn in between choosing which fic ending am I going to post and well, the alternate one is theirs for them to read here in my LJ account ^^ And oh, another reason is, a fried who is betaing this particular series had just returned from a vacation so the beta version is still not up yet.

So you have read the Part 2 then? *snickers* my main OTP is also NaruSasu but I never write KakaSasu. (just that one, when I've decided to give in, yay)

OMGWTF CACTUS!? LOOK WHAT I DID! (And about damn time too!)

[rainbowfragment]

This thing is really, really fucking deep! I love it!!! I adore it! One of the offically most beautiful NaruSasu's I have every come across! I will soooo give you a nice beautiful thought out impression of it when you post it up all corrected and double checked!

Which means, you know it!

WE FINALLY BETAED THE THING! ALL OF IT! TOLD YOU WE WOULD! (Sorry... that took forever, but we can still be counted on to get the job done! As promised! And loved doing it too! Go ahead and post, check some things cause there were questions in there cause once I wasn't sure if you were trying to say Mangykyou Sharingan... or however it is spelled or if you meant Mange and I had not fucking clue what that was... who knows...?)

So, then you will get post upon post of my impression. Maybe I can even convince Hee-chan to do it too! ^___^

Sincerest,
Shinigami Twin 04
(Quatre Raberba Winner)

Re: OMGWTF CACTUS!? LOOK WHAT I DID! (And about damn time too!)

[zaccheo]

Ah yes, I've seen it already. I'll upload it later, hehe. And yeah. It should be that deep. It's not that I want to philosophize the whole thing but its like delving deeper in Naruto and Sasuke's relationship. This is what you get on having a several day marathon on the manga. It had me form a lot of theories and possibilities as I further study their character and their dynamics. So apparently, this is the result of it.

And I would rather view the first one as a mind fuck tho. You gotta hand it to Naruto. Hitting nerves even though he did not really intend it.

Re: OMGWTF CACTUS!? LOOK WHAT I DID! (And about damn time too!)

[rainbowfragment]

lmao. Yeah... manga reading marathon does do that. I know I felt the same when I got bored one summer and marathoned all ten or whatever volumes of Fruits Basket that I own. Yep... that was a hard thing to hold to. I really, really, really wanted a fic on it then. Now it has kinda faded in everything. Took a fucking year, but finally the urge has dimmed. And now I am behind on reading again so I know the urge will manifest itself in the most terrible way if I do indeed return. But I don't really expect to any time soon now... yeah... with all this shit I am trying to sweep under the rug. lol

Re: OMGWTF CACTUS!? LOOK WHAT I DID! (And about damn time too!)

[zaccheo]

Hah, and failing to do so would just annoy you even more, teehee.

Yea, it never occured to me that Naruto could rape Sasuke's mind but I guess he can, from his character and his strong will and personality, it will feel right for him to be like this. The only thing he know is that he's too dead-set on taking Sasuke 'back' that he does not even know that he's hitting the rightsore spot.Teehee. Sasuke's poor mind has recieved a lot of abuse already. And because of Naruto's abrasive nature, he'll get into Sasuke's skin once more (or rather this time, to his brain)

though i don't know if what I'm spouting right now is valid or true because its already 6:30am and i still have to go to the office and my mind is getting blank already.

And yeah, of course, if he'll ever get scared, he would stil keep his 'Im-so-cool-attitude-I'm-above-vulnerability shits so it won't be obvious. *shrugs I dunno. Maybe I'll think about that when my reasoning is much more active and my brain is not half-dead

and yes, I also missed talking to ye!