Was - Rewrite

[yzabel_writings]

Re: this post...

It's nothing you can directly see here in this LJ, but just to say: at last, bits by bits in between school trips and shite, I've finally rewritten those parts that were causing me problems in Was. I won't repost everything, because a lot of these changes are sentences thrown here and there, and it'd be too tedious a process to

Comments

[larystienli]

I like this idea very much. Sounds like Dana is turning into something like the evil counterpart to Lyle. (Well, if I understood the whole Heartless business well ^^; )

[yzabel_writings]

Oh my, I hadn't even thought about that, but it's so true. ^^ (Well, glad to see my mind works well even when I'm not aware of it, huh.)