The Limits (for rezarick)

[yyexchangemod]

Title: The Limits
Raiting: R (mild swearing, mild smut)
Genre: Angst
Word count: 8,395
Recipient: rezarick
Summary: Inoo knew Yamada and Yuto better than themselves.
Author's note: Courtney, I'm so sorry I didn't fulfill the psychological/creepy-esque part well, if at all! Gomen ~ But I hope you'll like the ending!

Comments

[rezarick]

I had no idea how anyone would be able to write this but wow.

Wow.

Despite it not being creepy, I think it's definitely sprinkled with little spots of psychological-like situations. Especially Yamada tying Yuto to a chair and really the whole thing. I really, really, really love how you made us feel and think like Yuto, such as how everything seemed so normal, like a regular fic with a slightly possessive hero, until Yuto himself realized that their relationship wasn't normal

[obsessed_makpa]

it was definitely not his fault that his heart functioned like an overly sensitive teenager :))

ohmygod this fic. like i thought i was going to be the usual cute but it has the whole dangerous obsession plot and whoaaaa. okay. okay. OnO

Yuto heaved his suitcase, and made a U-turn. He would take another bus back home.

THIS WAS GOOD. I DID NOT EXPECT THIS END AT ALL BUT GOOD ON YUTO FOR WALKING AWAY JUST. some things just don't work out good fic good job. D: :O

[defiancebyfire]

I have cried and exchanged very passionate uppercase tweets/messages with xingphonic regarding this fic and--

Kudos to recipient-san for putting a very challenging request amongst all the fluff we have this cycle, and double kudos to writer-san for taking up the challenge and coming up wih this lkjhsggafsd

Jesus. Just. I can probably attach a screencap of the things Sheryl and I have said about this if I try REALLY HARD.

Like how this screams "I Love The Way You Lie" when I read it and oh my god so dysfunctional and obsessive lkjhgfdsa

and Nakajima "I can't even go to a school meeting because Yamada wants to have sex with a sick me" Yuto

I. This is fic for grownups. Because. That character development and that ending and their lives. YUTO LEFT HIS OWN HOME WITH ONLY A BACKPACK. And ugh so much feelings this is so good, very realistic way of depicting relationships and life and struggles, finding yourself and owning up to the things you've decided THIS IS SUCH A GROWNUP FIC YOU ARE AWESOME

[xingphonic]

^I have been outed. xD I will do my best not to scream and sob all over you too, author-san.

Just. Wow. This is amazing.

The first part made me laugh so much - the dynamics between the members of the band, Hikaru's "Cheesy Love Songs" and how eventually even Yuto begins to almost call his songs that, too. And the betting. Teeth emitting light. HIKARU. xD

I particularly love the part where Yuto realised the nature of their relationship out of the blue;;
The human mind worked in curious ways: he realized it not when Inoo warned him, not during one of those sessions where they tried to overpower each other, but at a time where nothing could hint at how fucked up their relationship was.

We all had problems better dealt with on our own. Inoo was right. But that sentence also meant: “Don’t assign others yours.”

Don’t assign others yours.Their obsession with each other and the possessiveness - I was so scared halfway through the fic. Just aurjsdhgjds it was dangerous and frightening and I couldn't stop reading. Yuto missing his family

[ryokawa619]

this is amazing! this shows a side of relationship most (fanfic) writers aren't comfortable writing (or would not think of doing/?) because really, it's too sad a story but for real! i'm in love with this thank you. :)