He Who Searches for Himself - Chapter 43

Nov 12, 2011 23:36

Chapter: XLIII (43) - Bad Witch
Rating: PG
Word Count: 10,327 / 431,730
Beta: AmunRa
Previous: Chapter list for Part 1 thru Current
Alternative: located on fanfiction.net
Chapter Summary: Ed begins to reveal the magnitude of information he's returned home with before Dante finally resurfaces.
Note: You get some super sketchy storyboard style ( Read more... )

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anonymous November 13 2011, 16:31:05 UTC
I reviewed on FF.net, but I then realized that I forgot to say happy belated birthday!
I'd send you some cookies and possibly Timbits if I could.

Blessed be,
JammersFlood

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yuukihikari November 16 2011, 00:45:52 UTC
lol thank you XD mmm Timbits. It's the thought that counts :D
Thanks so much :3

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Awesooooome! anonymous November 15 2011, 20:16:45 UTC
Great update! I really like how you worked Olivia Armstrong and Briggs into the story and can't wait to see how that works out.

Ed bringing back all of that knowledge was really insightful -- to us, they ARE just alphabets, but who knows what they might do in the hands of alchemists?

And Maria Ross! Oh man, did Dante kill her and bring her back as some kind of homunculus? Creeepy. (BTW, it's a 'vial' (noun) and not 'vile' (adjective))

And would it be too much to ask to get Ed to admit he'd like to find a girlfriend? :-)

(Oh, and a belated happy birthday!)

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Re: Awesooooome! yuukihikari November 16 2011, 01:07:57 UTC
Thank you :D Olivia Armstrong was one of my favourite characters from the manga, so I'm giving a shout out to her.

Ed has such an open-minded perspective on our world's knowledge in contexts that we would never even know to consider. He's probably spent a lot of time thinking "wow, what if..."

fixed :D thanks for the catch

LOL... we'll see if Ed's ever going to be in a mindset where he wants a girlfriend lol

XD Thank you!

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