He Who Searches for Himself - Chapter 39

[yuuki]

Chapter: XXXIX (39) - The Crimson Charm - Part 2
Rating: M
Word Count: 12,003 / 391,144
Warning: This chapter is dark, violent, bloody, and contains numerous f-bombs (thank you, Ed). Envy was created to scare people.
Beta: AmunRa
Previous: Chapter list for Part 1 thru Current
Alternative: located on fanfiction.net
Chapter Summary: Ed finally

Comments

[evil_little_dog]

Okay, because I'm dying here -

I'M DYING here and I'm glad there's more so I'm not chewing my fingers off at the current cliffhanger. Though I'm sure there'll be more.

I love all of Al's thoughts. It feels like you put a lot of work into all of them. I'm both sad and relieved Diana's dead, probably feeling something like Al about that.

Ed and Winry's predicament - maaaaaan.

Is it wrong to tell you how much I love that piece of art? I'm such a sucker for H/C.

Winry with a stack of tools at the ready - so perfect. Ed trying to remain calm despite all the thoughts in his head about what might happen next - and how he's going to get them out of this mess - maaaaaaaan.

[yuukihikari]

Muwahahaha....

It's a lovely big arch of trouble for Ed and Winry.

Al was some work, yeah. Writing Ed just likes to flow, writing Al requires lots of thinking cause he's so full of brain-work (his thought process was like a big puzzle that I had to put together, but pretending I didn't have the map for it). He I had to write Ed and Al in separate documents because the feel of their two points of view was so drastically different (sometimes I can do it in just one file).

I love h/c too XD; horribly guilty pleasure

... *reverts to muwaahahaha?*

[evil_little_dog]

Now you know my reason for writing my Crossover Manga/Anime fic. The annnngst. The possibilities for H/C. The annnnngst. MmMMMMmm.

[yuukihikari]

I like annnnnngst *does encourage!* Ugh I still feel bad for Winry *hugs her*

[ishte]

I'm sure I keep saying this but OMG CLIFFF!!!!

btw, I saw: "There was only fifteen minutes" should read "there were only fifteen minutes". I missed this darling little pixie. I'm grabbing it and adding it to the whole text.

[yuukihikari]

MUWAHAHAH... but the next chapter isn't a cruel cliffhanger like the last two have been, if that makes things any better XD;

*goes in and fixes* thank you!