He Who Searches for Himself - Chapter 37

[yuuki]

Chapter: XXXVII (37) - Pages from the Journeyman's Voyage
Rating: PG
Word Count: 10,020
Warning: Swearing
Beta: AmunRa
Previous: Chapter list for Part 1 thru Current
Alternative: located on fanfiction.net
Chapter Summary: Ed gets a late birthday gift to attend a up-scale concert with suspicion that it might be nothing more than a Nazi coersion

Comments

[ceirwy]

Every time you post it so hard for me to comment because I fear I'll just be reposting just about all the fic at you XD

The change in Al's eyes in particular fascinates me. Well done incorporating canon changes. (though like you, FMA1 was my original fandom, so I'll miss grey eyed Al.)

And aw, look at Edward being a little mature. They are very amusing and heart warming together.

[yuukihikari]

XD er... that's okay LOL!

Thanks, I wanted something that had no physical or mental impact on Al (other than the poor boy might be pretty traumatized). The colour change worked out pretty well ^^

Ed's finally growing up... 'bout time LOL. He'd probably be a mess without Winry around.

Thank you :D

Edit, edit, edit

[evil_little_dog]

For the life of him, the flame alchemist could not figure out what the heck had happened and what would have caused not only this kind of damage, but caused two people to disappear. Where did they go? Titles should be capitalized! :D

"She was left with enough to make her appear human... but she's more or less hallow, and if she had full Red Water treatment, she's going to have a chunk of a Red Stone sitting in her lower core." Hallow? So, she's holy? :D :D You mean 'hollow', right

Re: Edit, edit, edit

[yuukihikari]

... that's the second time 'hallow' has been pointed out to me... for the same chapter *goes to fix... now!*

Mustang's cause is gathering support... he's got a city to conquer.

I love Al... he's so sweet and innocent (and just astoundingly smart at the same time). That's one kid with his head on right.

Maria and Russell are the oddest duo to stick together LOL. At least she has practice. Poor Brigitte hasn't really been relivant for a while XD; safest to send her away rather than have Dante near by to snag her for some reason I don't know yet o_x

If a person doesn't honestly know Ed... he's such a puzzle. Or a maze. Or both.

Yeah Ed noticed. His lungs are mad at him for noticing. The application of booze can do wonders for those with tongue-tie problems LOL

[evil_little_dog]

*giggles*

Mustang does have a city to conquer. He's gonna do it, and figure out a way to bring Ed home, and Al and Izumi back from the Gate, and EVERYTHING'S GONNA BE PERFECT EXCEPT FOR THAT MISSING EYE OF HIS.

...or something?

Maria does have practice in dealing with child alchemists. Probably a very good thing, considering this assignment.

Ed's a lot of things. ALL CONTRADICTORY. We love him, though.

Winry's probably very happy Ed noticed. :D

[evil_little_dog]

...no link to next chapter!

eta: OH, I'M ALL CAUGHT UP NOW.

[yuukihikari]

LOL

That's why you have to look forward to it

it's done, I just need to finish up the one after it, because they're tied really closely together - it has to jive completely cause I'm picky >O

[evil_little_dog]

Yay, something to look forward to! *dances*