OH MY GOD IT'S OVER~

Jul 10, 2008 01:08


Stolen Chapter 12 - The Sun
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Stolen

Chapter 12- The Sun

The battle’s almost won; we’re only several miles from the Sun.

Dinner was eater in silence. The chicken was burnt and the potatoes were dry, but nobody felt the need to speak. Sakura knew she had filled two plates too many, but she still hoped that some miracle would mean ( Read more... )

c:yuui, p:kurofai, u:au, s:tsubasa, f:stolen, fanfic, c:fai, c:kurogane

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maijame July 10 2008, 12:37:15 UTC
Ah... I was wondering just HOW you would bring him around... well... scientifically, if his brain was dead for more than ten minutes he's supposed to be a vegetable, but since it's magic... Ah, yes, the wonders of magic!^_____________^

Good Job and hyuu, you finished! Congrats!
I don't feel the need for a fluffy epilogue... It's a cute enough ending as it is.

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yuui_nyanko July 10 2008, 14:22:43 UTC
yaaay! thankyou ^____^ there was also the issue about him breathing while his heart wasnt beating for a bit.... my friend was like "where would the oxygen go??? D:"

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maijame July 10 2008, 16:21:48 UTC
Smart friend you have there!^^
Well, the problem is that the brain shuts down and there's no way known to restore the nerves after that happened. But like I said,...healing magic solves the problem. Magic can even heal a damaged nervous system, no problem.^__^

And I guess Kurogane would be on your case if you decided to make Fai even more retarded... *evil cackle*
This way he's all sparkly happily ever after... or something.^^

(Longer than the original comment..>.> oh well...)

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yuui_nyanko July 10 2008, 16:34:33 UTC
*giggles* yeah, this fic needed an ENDING. =3 though, its still really open, so nothing's stopping me adding to it... sidestories, minisequels ftw.

i had this mad, stupid idea that fai's dad IS the mafia XD;;; *shot*

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marynyu July 10 2008, 17:59:14 UTC
Hyuuu, that was lovely!!! It was a bit quick for an ending, but still feels right that it ended there.

And yes, magic trumps biology XD. Gotta love that magic!!

Now get to writing a new fanfic already!!!! *cackles*

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yuui_nyanko July 10 2008, 19:11:55 UTC
ahaha~ am I not allowed time off for good behaviour? ;D

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yuui_nyanko July 10 2008, 19:12:36 UTC
I'm glad you think so ^___^

Your icon gave me the lulz~

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valentines_av July 11 2008, 04:49:27 UTC
Very sweet ending! ^_^

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yuui_nyanko July 11 2008, 18:25:39 UTC
X3 thankyou~

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haru_kurofai July 15 2008, 00:18:17 UTC
Yuui-chan you've done it!!!! <333333 *tackle glomps*
I've been meaning to comment for a while..
Cos I read it on my phone *cough cough* on my lunch break *cough cough* XD
I'm just happy that KuroFai in both universes have a happy ending ;3
I loved this series to bits <333

Another fic?
Will we get to see cat!Ashura-papa in Fay's Sweet Home? XDD
Fuzzy goodness XDDDD

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yuui_nyanko July 15 2008, 09:53:33 UTC
I'm working on ...... about four oneshots before i think of more fay's sweet home XD

XDDD ashura as the cat-mafia boss~

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