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Stolen CH11 - Quote EDITED

Jul 07, 2008 03:06

There are probably a million and one mistakes, but I promised myself that I couldn't sleep until it was posted, and it's now 3am.

Chapter Title - Quote
Rating - M
Words - 2521
Pairings - KuroYuui, KuroFai, Sortof YuuiFay AshuraYuui... but not really. ^___^;;

Only one chapter left~

Stolen

Chapter Eleven - Quote

Quote, you are my soul, unquote.

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yuui_nyanko July 7 2008, 12:26:27 UTC

yeah... i'll probably edit it when i can be bothered XDD maybe some point today?

yuui_nyanko July 7 2008, 16:03:53 UTC

edited~! i hope it's better now ^__^

micah_piper July 7 2008, 08:34:31 UTC

I agree. The ending sounded a bit rushed. Don't worry so much about posting by a certain time. We will all wait (and try to do it patiently) until you feel as though you are done. I think most people would want to read what you consider to be your best work and have to wait on it a little longer, rather than read something now that you don't feel comfortable with.

That being said, it was still really good. I love this fic. Poor Kuro-sensei! I hope Fay-sensei wakes up anyway!

yuui_nyanko July 7 2008, 12:26:47 UTC

i'll edit it at some point today~

yuui_nyanko July 7 2008, 16:03:20 UTC

eeee~dited ^___^

lizzie_2113 July 7 2008, 14:50:39 UTC

DDD:
Now I have 'It's not too late' by three days grace stuck in my head.
I don't even like three days grace.
B-but it's not too late[NEVER TOO LA-ATE], is it?
good work!
Love the drama and you BETTER POST THE NEXT ONE SOON, WOMAN!!
XD

yuui_nyanko July 7 2008, 16:04:19 UTC

i'm not saying anything XD;;; just keep reading~

haru_kurofai July 7 2008, 15:02:55 UTC

Yuui-chan you've done it!! ;A; *hugs*
I feel so sad now.. I really hope Fai-sensei would wake up..
But I'm glad to see Ashura-papa being portrayed as a father figure in disguise, instead of the usual psycho image he tends to have XDD
I love this fic so much <33333 1 more chapter to go!!

yuui_nyanko July 7 2008, 16:05:43 UTC

I like Ashura being portrayed as a father too; I really don't think he ever meant to hurt Fay at all, and I don't really like the fanfics where Ashura abuses him. They just feel wrong.

I'll have the chapter up ASAP~

marynyu July 7 2008, 17:38:55 UTC

That's so..... SO SAAAAD!!!!! TT_TT Poor Kuro-Sensei, he needs a hug damn it!!!

I really liked the chapter, I remember you saying you didn't like to write action scenes, but this one came out alright.

Now I need an update!!!! ^^

yuui_nyanko July 7 2008, 20:20:57 UTC

*giggles*~ that was my first action scene and... i know i could have done better, so that's something to improve on. its kinda hard to make it a fast-paced scene when there's lots of detail involved though, i guess