KuroFay Summer Challenge Entry

Aug 06, 2008 23:28


Title: N/A *is too lazy*
Chapters: 1
Words: 1499
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Rating: I have no idea. It'll be a PG13 for swearing though, I guess. (I mean; Kurogane's in it. On a farm.)

Fay smiled to himself as he saw the first rays of sunlight peek over the horizon, the orange beams catching the tops of tall sunflowers and glinting from the glass of the worn blue ( Read more... )

l:oneshot, p:kurofai, u:canon, c:sakura, c:syaoran, s:tsubasa, fanfic, c:fai, c:mokona, c:kurogane

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kitsunesakurano August 7 2008, 06:09:11 UTC
This was sooo cute, Yuui!

I loved the opening the best! so calm and scenic!

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yuui_nyanko August 7 2008, 11:29:28 UTC
thankyou X3

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cellophaneroses August 7 2008, 19:11:36 UTC
..ahahahaha. Fye was trying to wash the spots off the cow. As soon as I got that I was dying of amused. xDD Which was of course helped by the horse-riding lesson dialogue. XDD

Cute~ I like how you equipped the crazy-Fye-haha with the little intimate moment at the end. :] It was sweet. :]

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yuui_nyanko August 7 2008, 19:42:46 UTC
hehe, thankyou ^___^

i realised as i was writing that because not only was fai from a cold country; he was taken straight from royalty to a dungeon to royalty(ish) again, so he wouldn't have had any experience with those kinds of animals at all.

I loved the bit where he's playing mother to the lambs X3 I also loved writing the horse bit, wondering how many people would get fooled XD it was fun~

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valentines_av August 9 2008, 04:46:28 UTC
Eeeeeeh so cute!

Oh I love the lamb scene! I grew up in farming country and the thought of Kuro wrestling with a hyperactive hungry lamb is just so endearing!
(please can I draw it? X3)

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yuui_nyanko August 9 2008, 07:23:55 UTC
I'd be delighted if you drew it X3 I was planning on it myself at some point anyway~

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valentines_av August 9 2008, 12:45:45 UTC
Cool! Thanks muchly!

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micah_piper August 9 2008, 06:11:22 UTC
I know that I'm a couple days late, but I really liked this. It makes me want to read more. The picture you chose is one of my favorites, so I'm really interested in reading the rest.

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yuui_nyanko August 9 2008, 07:24:36 UTC
the rest?? ... *cough*oneshot

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micah_piper August 9 2008, 08:06:57 UTC
Oh no! Did I miss that in your description somewhere? Shoot! Well, I'm really sad now, but it's still a good...oneshot...reguardless. :)

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yuui_nyanko August 9 2008, 08:08:36 UTC
I didn't write oneshot anywhere, but I thought putting "Chapters: 1" would kinda get the point across?? ^___^;; sorry~

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anyjen February 12 2009, 16:33:39 UTC
That was very cute. :3

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yuui_nyanko February 12 2009, 19:12:40 UTC
Thankyou ^____^

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