Chained Chapter Two: Seperate Beds PLEEEEEASE???

[yuuhi_suushi]

Hello, everyone. Thanks for all the awesome reviews: I didn't really think this story would start out well. I couldn't stop spacing out in all my classes (and managed to get away with it XD), wondering nervously about how many reviews I got and if I got any flames and if I should delete it. But your reviews made me really, really happy (and I still

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[resound]

HAHAHAHAHA!
Sora called him a prostitute. ROFL.
(i just looked that up b.t.w.)

lol.
anyway, nice chapter!!! XDDDD
This gets funnier and funnier as you go on.
"shittier" is a word that exists in MY vocabulary!!!
<3

anyway, I think you should write Chained Reversed (did you base that name off of "reverse rebirth from CoM? just curious). Riku's p.o.v. would be interesting...considering what Sora said about him "screwing little boys senseless". lol. yea...Im crazy...oh well!

I think this is one of my favorite stories i've read lately. Considering i'm what most people would consider "preppy" its a nice change of thought.

okkk...end of ramble-y comment!

Can't wait for more!!!!

~Kitsuki

[yuuhi_suushi]

Wow, such a long review~ Yaaay for long reviews!! *whacked*

Actually, Riku called Sora a harlot... Nehehe....

"Shittier" is also in my vocabulary, too. Wooo~

I've been writing out Reverse already. And yes, I based to name off of CoM. ^^ I like Riku's POV. XD Oh, and Sora didn't say that about Riku. He was talking about Sephiroth. *nod*

Yaaaay I'm glad that you like Chained. I'd kinda like it if more people would comment (because comments make me strive more to update), but it's great that I have an awesome reviewer like you~ ^___^

Thanks again~ :3

[resound]

hehehehe....

it would have been hilarious if Sora had said it. But Riku makes it funny too.

SEPHY! awww....i thought it was Riku damn this perverted mind.... lol.

~Looking forward to Chained Reverse~

[beladara]

I likie I likie!!! have a cyber cookie *shoves plate of chocolate chip, chocolate covered cyber cookies at yuuhiru* I would LOVE chained reversed. And may I make a suggestion? why don't you try putting the dialogue between riku and sora in diffrent colors? like sora could be black and riku blue or something? just so it's easier to follow.

*waves* bye bye for now. KISS. *blows big wet sloppy cyber kiss*

[yuuhi_suushi]

Yay for cyber cookes~ ^___^ *feeds them to me and Riku*

I'm working on Reverse already. Putting the dialogue in different colors??? Hmm... Explain please! So that I can make sure that what I think you're referrring to is correct, ne~

*waves back* Thanks for reviewing! Chapter three will come out soon~

[beladara]

Well when they were arguing I kinda got lost to who was saying what and I thought it would have been better if one of them was written in blue and the other in black or red. That way it's be easier to follow. *glomps yuuhiru* Thanks for the great writing. I love you! *teary emotional puppy eyes*

[yuuhi_suushi]

Yay, I am loved~ HA HA *whacked* I wish I'd get more comments and stuff, though. It'd make me write faster. T 3 T

Oh, I see. Well, there's going to be more Riku x Sora fighting like that, so I SHOULD consider doing that. ^___^ Thanks for the suggestion~

:3

[immortal_ayumi]

it was goood! good i say! i love the funneh parts! add more XD i dun get one thing though leon and cloud were together!? i looooved it ^_^ keep on writing yuuhiru! woot woot!

[yuuhi_suushi]

Uwaaah, thanks Ayu~ ^__^
Yes, it's pretty obvious that Leon and Cloud USED to be together. More will be revealed later. Maybe. XD

[immortal_ayumi]

np! ^_^

XD lol i c i c! nice icon its very cute ^^

[beladara]

Um yay. Someone actually listened to me for one in my life. Anyway I really hope ypu get bombarded with reviews so that you update faster. *evil laugh* I am selfish. *shushing noises* but don't tell anyone. Can I add you as a friend? Asking cause not sure if you want someone as loopy as I am for a friend but hey, who knows. I gtg. Bye bye yuuhi *big wet soppy cyber kiss again*

[yuuhi_suushi]

^__^ You can add me as a friend; it's no problem. Just leave a comment on the introduction-entry of my LJ and tell me what I can call you and a bit about yourself. I'm looking forward to being good friends with you, ne~ :3