Comments | yuri_challenge: [Fic] First Date (Aika/Fina, Skies of Arcadia)

penguinzero in yuri_challenge

[Fic] First Date (Aika/Fina, Skies of Arcadia)

May 02, 2006 19:14

Title: First Date
Fandom: Skies of Arcadia
Rating: PG
Pairing: Aika/Fina
Challenge: Quote - "Fina felt comfortable in Yafutoma; the breezes there were cool and soothing, unlike the ones that blew under the Red Moon." [requested by fanaticalone]
Word Count: 2496
Notes: Light, fluffy, a bit silly. Hopefully pleasing.

( Fina felt comfortable in Yafutoma; the breezes there were cool and soothing, unlike the ones that blew under the Red Moon. )

round 02: january 2006 [no theme], medium: fiction, creator: penguinzero, fandom: skies of arcadia

Comments 5

fandomgreen May 2 2006, 02:34:05 UTC

Cute and funny. Entirely in-character, as well. I could hear the voices in my head.

This gets a thumbs-up from me.

(Hah! "kesa" = "sake" backwards. Bwaha.)

penguinzero May 2 2006, 03:23:42 UTC

Well, it seemed appropriate -- it's been a while since I played SoA, but I seem to recall similarly scrambled names for the other varieties of loqua referenced in the game -- 'mur,' for instance.

Glad it worked -- had a few rough moments with it, but it sorted itself out in the end. Thanks!

instantamazon May 2 2006, 04:03:24 UTC

i'm playing skies right now =D!
good job!

penguinzero May 4 2006, 03:56:34 UTC

Thanks!

I should probably replay it at some point... but right now I'm working on Suikoden V, and then there's some older games like Wild Arms 3 (Virginia/Maya forever!) and Xenosaga that I never finished... Ah, the busy life.

admiral_j July 22 2006, 15:59:59 UTC

Fina frowned. "But... nothing's been drinking me. I haven't been drunk."

Huzzah for drunk pirates who haven't been drunk! Stroke of genius, Penguin.

Great story, although I must admit that no matter how good Aika/Fina is, it always makes me think, "Poor Vyse..."

J.