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Sep 27, 2012 17:06

Author: yurei_spiritTitle: Lost ( Read more... )

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rosswen91 September 27 2012, 17:37:22 UTC
awwwwwwwwwww, this was sooo heart warming and cute!
I loved how innocent Tetsu was.. and, Hyde loves him sooo much! *blushes with joy*
congrats for your first fic! I really enjoyed reading! and, this one reminded me that I love Hyde/Tetsu more than Tetsu/Hyde!
thank you so much for writing, and sharing this!

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yurei_spirit September 27 2012, 23:07:59 UTC
Yeay..., I always love innocent's tetsu too :D, hyde just can't resist him *lol
I loved Tetsu/Hyde too, but lately no one made Hyde/Tetsu fics anymore, I really missed them, so I thought to give it a try myself :p.
Thx, I really enjoyed writing this, and thank you soo much for reading and commenting (づ ˆ ³ ˆ)づ•°◦♡ ♥ ♡

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rosswen91 September 28 2012, 16:23:58 UTC
you and your hearts! :D
okay, lemme give it a try! how about these...

<3 -my friend told me that after posting, this totally will look like a heart!- <3 <3 it's fun to do these!

< ( ^ * ^< ) it's hugging you back! and, kissing you! Woah, I've reached to a new stage! *so proud*

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yurei_spirit September 28 2012, 23:44:54 UTC
Aww...kawaiii...
I'm kissing you back ( ˘ з(˘⌣˘)
*so proud of you*

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mme_h_confessor September 28 2012, 06:15:20 UTC
You could see it coming, but it was still sweet and pleasing, watching them get there! You still have to say, awww, and feel bad for him, when Tetsu murmurs, "i like pink."

And hyde can totally play the dominant partner in a fiction. hyde is an alpha personality, in real life. Not a bossy or mean one. But he's a strong personality and I think behind his being shy and soft spoken, there's not only a sweet-hearted person, there's also the guy who calls himself a BEAST, a VAMPyre, and owns it!

Neatly done, making Tetsu hyde's slave for a day, and hyde using him for that day, to participate in his own courting.

And hey! nice description of a kiss! Seeing all the things hyde does with that mouth and tongue in public has inspired your imagination :P

Congratulations on completing a fiction and on developing another language.

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yurei_spirit September 28 2012, 09:00:35 UTC
Yeah, it's quite predictable, but still soo sweet isn't... *lol*
It's fun to play with hyde's character. I'll try to make 'another' hyde next time :D. Dominant's hyde fit perfectly with innocent's tetsu. I love them so much...
Yeah you right..., I think I watched to much fanservice ;) :D...
Thanks, I'm glad you like it...
And thank you so much for reading and commenting... ♡

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mme_h_confessor September 28 2012, 12:34:53 UTC
"I think I watched too much fanservice ;) :D..."

What is this concept of which you speak, "too much fanservice?"

I think there's only, 'please mess with my insides some more, you cruel teases," and "Oh, my Dear God," just before fainting.

(portrait of a cruel tease: angel-lullaby.tumblr.
com/post/29094105284 )

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yurei_spirit September 28 2012, 14:01:51 UTC
Right...they're such a teaser ne...
Well, it was the idea..., to give us a little show and let the rest for our wild imagination .., and from this, born a lot of fics *lol*
Just too much teases so I couldn't resist imagined they were kissing like that *ahem*

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midori_masari September 28 2012, 17:05:14 UTC
aww~~ this was so cute! Thanks for sharing it ^^ It's a really great first fic, I loved it~! <3

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yurei_spirit September 28 2012, 23:48:29 UTC
HëHëHë (∩ , ∩ )づ , thank you so much *blushed*
Glad you like it...

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poonlij September 29 2012, 16:04:26 UTC
wow this is so cute. hyde is very romantic and sweet here. love it >

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yurei_spirit September 30 2012, 12:11:49 UTC
Yap...yap..., he's such a romantic, sweet and charming midget *I'm sorry..., I can't help it, LoL ♡ˆ▽ˆ*
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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pirate_mozart October 7 2012, 21:35:18 UTC
Wow! So cute and romantic! I love how Tetsu's so totally heartbroken and clueless up until the very end... Hyde really surprised him ^^

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yurei_spirit October 7 2012, 23:43:41 UTC
Un...,hyde knew that tetsu was heartbroken, yet he couldn't help amused by tetsu's jelousy *LoL*. Nice surprise for him :D.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks a lot for reading and commenting ♡ .

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