Hearts in Atlantis

[yuniquekimchi]

Title: Hearts in Atlantis
Author: yuniquekimchi
Length: Drabble
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Genre: Angst
Summary: "We're over."

Comments

[yuniquekimchi]

You can interpret it the way you want to, that's what I was going for.

[kpopstolemysoul]

Well done. Just the right amount of all sorts of ingredients and the whole thing quickly racing to a conclusion before the reader's brain gets too invested in the chore of deciding which speaker is which and who hurt whom in what way.

The whole thing has the feel of going over a waterfall in a raft. Not that I've actually done that.

[yuniquekimchi]

Ah, thank you. I like messing with people's minds.

[kpopstolemysoul]

lol I suppose I knew that about you as an author - And guess what... I really, really dislike having my mind messed with! (You can probably interpret that as a compliment to your writing if you think of it that way.)

[yuniquekimchi]

I do take that as a compliment actually LOL

[snow_meow]

So much angst and blame going on here.

[ehhlliie]

Beautifully written. This really tugged at my heart strings ;; and I interpreted it as jae leaving yunho! Well either way, it's still sad )):

[natzzef]

This made me feel sad, which means you've written it very well.

You tricked my heart into thinking it should beat for you. Now I'm trying to trick it into stopping.

Love this. Great opening line.

[yuniquekimchi]

Thank you! Happy you liked it :D