sj drabbles 1/2 (hallelujah)

Feb 14, 2010 01:14

title: hallelujah
summary: thirty hanchul moments, not necessarily connected
pairing/rating: hankyung/heechul, pg13
a/n: lines stolen from songs and one poem, pics up because I got bored waiting for remixied, who wrote thirty porn drabbles over at her comm, go look! :) we're writing to ~match~

it goes like this, the fourth the fifth )

character: hankyung, character: heechul

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remixied February 14 2010, 06:18:46 UTC
I will read all of these tomorrow (or later today...) and leave you a long flaily comment. For now though, congrats on finishing. AND I AM NOT YOUR FUCKING MENTOR.

And don't tell people to read my fail =_=

xoxox

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remixied February 14 2010, 06:25:39 UTC
OMFG. YOU SAID YOURS WERE LONG. YOU LIAR.

I LOVE YOU. I LOVE THESE. I KNOW I SAID I'D READ THEM TOMORROW, BUT I COULDN'T WAIT.

BETTER COMMENT TOMORROW. PROMISE.

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remixied February 14 2010, 17:11:01 UTC
Ugh. They all killed me. I went through and picked out my favorite lines, and it said my comment was too long. Suffice to say, your writing makes me laugh and cry and all sorts of other stuff. And I'm so excited for the next fifteen, you don't even understand. Because you write them so perfectly and it's all smooth and real and believable and just ugh. You kill me, you really do.

<333 U DA, U DA BEST!

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blahnicity February 16 2010, 07:08:09 UTC
ILU BBY. :) dun be excited, ;_;

NU U. BABY YOU DA BEST I EVER HAD

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aescapes February 14 2010, 07:11:30 UTC
you. you... jesus. you write them so well. i can't even. *_*

and you killed me with 8, 10, and 11, WHYYYYYY, WHY, SOBS. ;-;

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blahnicity February 16 2010, 07:08:44 UTC
omg I am still working my way through your poems, rl keeps infringing on me :\

CUDDLES. DUN CRY.

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aescapes February 16 2010, 07:17:42 UTC
WHAT, WHAT, WHY ARE YOU EVEN-- don't worry about those omg, i was only experimenting around with how to organize them; i forgot that people had actually started following my comm so i didn't realize what i was doing to your f-list!! I PUT A BIG APOLOGY UP RIGHT AFTER but now i realize it didn't get to you b/c that was on my... journal. SOB i'm so lame, sorry! JUST IGNORE THOSE, REALLY D:

GOOD HANCHUL ANGST MAKES ME, I CAN'T HELP IT :( cuddlesback :(

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blahnicity February 16 2010, 07:09:34 UTC
/holds singles awareness day, sigh :(

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bittersnow February 14 2010, 21:50:15 UTC
I don't know what else to say except: iloveyouiloveyouiloveyouiloveyou to the nth degree. I will now attempt a more coherent comment

I just love the idea of matching ring bands, although that is to be expected for two people who are clearly so married to each other. Might it continue as a motif in the second half?

You infuse so much emotional impact into your writing, I just...it makes me want to weep with joy, sadness, longing, nostalgia. I actually did shed tears after reading the berkley square one a while back.

And the way you tackled almost every facet of their relationship from their friendship, their desires, their challenges, their complete lack of pretension with each other physically and emotionally, their love for one another is just so...Hanchul.

Ergh, did I mention I love you? B/c I really really do.

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bittersnow February 14 2010, 21:51:53 UTC
PS-

I also hate you for being so damn good.

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blahnicity February 16 2010, 18:17:25 UTC
:D ILY TOOOOOOOOO.

I thought maybe it was too cliche...but maybe? I love them wearing rings for each other as well.

D: noo dun cry. these were all happy! well actually one was deathfic but I changed it to keep them all non angsty.

FEEL FREE TO PREMISE ME. /FLAILS AROUND FOR PLOT

ILUTOOOOO~ :)

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13fireflies February 14 2010, 23:05:18 UTC
LKSDGHKJSAGJSDKLAHJSDK;LGJAKSJDGHLKSDGJALKFJ OMFG FOR THE HANCHUL <3
12 is my fav, they should just get married already. ^^
I LOVE your hanchul.

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blahnicity February 16 2010, 20:24:56 UTC
HANCHUL! \O/// ILTSFM

omg they should *__*

ty! :) <33

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