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Aug 23, 2009 15:16

first drabble

inspired by : within temptation - somewhere

click to read, fic of sort )

drabble

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dhengsaeng August 23 2009, 13:07:47 UTC
AJSHDAKJSDKS I KNEW IT. YUNJAEE ♥
bb you make me ship them again ._.
and you. you. need to write more. for srs

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yunahe August 23 2009, 13:29:20 UTC
guh. what else would i write about BUT yunjae thank you bb♥
uh yeah, i am writing, i just haven't got them done yet XD

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moonkissedx August 23 2009, 14:11:54 UTC
write more. please do. omg. awesome writing here.

minor errors though ):

you hear something pounds and you figured out that it's your heart

you hear something pound and you figure out that it's your heart

someday your salvation will be yours.

(there's basically nothing wrong with the sentence but... sounds weird?)

someday salvation will be yours.

idkidkidk, but this made me incoherent in a way.

you have to write more! ♥

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yunahe August 23 2009, 14:16:55 UTC
ahaa, i knew i still have mistakes there! thanks for spotting them out ;-;

AND THANK YOU your comment made my day♥. i will soon :D

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snowolfly August 23 2009, 14:22:51 UTC
UGYAAAAAAAAAAAA
hooray for yunjae~
btw this drabble thing berry nice u know :D

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yunahe August 25 2009, 05:56:55 UTC
haha thank youu :D

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twnklsnowflake August 23 2009, 14:47:07 UTC
i love it! you should write more:)
-gives you lotsa cookies-

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sylphiawings August 23 2009, 20:09:07 UTC
aww, now that I've read it, it's cute ><
I love these types of fanfics. ~

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