The Falling Leaves (one shot)

Apr 09, 2017 15:20

Title: The Falling Leaves ( Read more... )

juntoshi, one shot, sakumoto

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learashi April 9 2017, 08:53:59 UTC
Lovely angst on a Sunday evening.
Nino was so protective of Ohno, even though he seemed to be too harsh on Jun.
Jun was so conflicted and even though he tried mto love Sho, most of his heart stayed with Ohno.
Thank you for sharing.

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yun_miyake April 9 2017, 23:48:12 UTC
thanks for reading and leaving a comment :)
you are right that nino is protective to ohno and told jun to go away
i think what makes jun conflicted was the real reason behind their break up
so sad, but it can't be helped TT

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leiva21 April 9 2017, 14:26:04 UTC

I'm suffering from a bad headache right now but your Juntoshi/ sakumoto lure me in.
I find this story really sad, obviously Jun still loves Satoshi but too bad Satoshi didn't want to see Jun sad so he lets him go before Jun found out.
And that ending! I hope he'll go back to Sho again (´・_・`)

Thanks for this!

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yun_miyake April 9 2017, 23:50:25 UTC
I hope you're getting better now and I hope this fic doesn't make your headache worse ;)

thanks for reading and commenting and sorry for the angst feeling
jun and ohno should have been happy, but they must face the break up and ohno was gone :(

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mcfib29 April 9 2017, 17:40:59 UTC
Welcome back. Reading this before going to sleep cause I missed your fics & it's SakuMoto & Juntoshi my fave OTP's. It's a sad ending, Ohno broke up with Jun cause of his sickness but it seems Jun still cares & loves him. Heartbreaking :-(

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yun_miyake April 9 2017, 23:52:56 UTC
thank you :)

yes, i agree with you about jun who still cares and loves ohno, even though he is in a relationship with sho

it is sad that they have to be apart that way TT

thanks for reading, hugs

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yuuki_73 May 22 2017, 03:08:09 UTC
this was unexpectedly beautiful, despite all the tragedies!
Despite the storms in his life, Jun kept the feet on the ground and loved!
A hard lesson to learn.
Thank you for sharing.

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yun_miyake May 23 2017, 02:18:49 UTC
thanks for reading
yeah, I think Jun has to be strong :)
sho will be there for him

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