[Rokujou] by yumi_michiyo

[yumi_michiyo]

Title: Rokujou
Author: yumi_michiyo
Rating: T
Genre: Romance/Tragedy
Pairing: Sango/Miroku
Summary: All he ever wanted to do was to make her happy; it was the only thing a cursed monk like himself had to offer. A short story told with six different emotions. Sango/Miroku. WARNING: Character death
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4978054/1/

Comments

[kmoaton]

I really enjoyed your first post. Sometimes, I think the gang forgets Miroku has feeling because he usually hides them so well. I'm interested is seeing how everything plays out.

[yumi_michiyo]

Thanks. It will be coming up quite soon, once I do the filler chapters.

[yumi_michiyo]

Sure thang :D How can I abandon my crack masterpiece, eh? Once I decide how OOC I want Kagome to be, I'll post it up. *grins*

[luxken27]

Well I liked this! I didn't think it was so dark and angsty...unless you're hiding the other five chapters somewhere! You did a great job with the description, setting the scene, making the actions (and reactions) vivid. It's always exciting to see a new Mir/San serial pop up on my flist.

Why don't you post this to mirsanficart as well?

Good luck with RL - mine's gotten hella busy, too, and I've been too damn tired to really work on any of my stuff this week. I have 'off' til next Tuesday, though, so here's hoping I can recover swiftly and be productive, LOL :P

[yumi_michiyo]

It can only go downhill from here :D I'm afraid that the next few chapters are going to turn out fluffy and happy too, gotta work on that... Thanks though! It's always nice to receive compliments (which I honestly don't deserve).

I will, in a moment.

Yeah! I want to see more Sess/Kag from you (new guilty pleasure)!