Heh, it's one of those things that I knew was coming, since you've been warning for it since the beginning, and it still blindsided me. You did a wonderful job with it, really choked me up at the end. I felt so bad for Sango, losing him after all that they'd been through.
and it still blindsided me Whoa - was it that unexpected? I seem to have shocked quite a few by killing off Miroku (no mean feat considering how much I love him).
You did a wonderful job with it, really choked me up at the end. Thanks so much, I was really nervous about the response to this chapter - glad to see it went down (relatively) well. Especially since you're like my writing idol and your feedback always makes me squee. *blushes*
I felt so bad for Sango, losing him after all that they'd been through. It hurt to kill Miroku off because I was anticipating Sango's feelings T.T
You had me in tears by the end. I really don't know what else to say but this was wonderful beyond belief. You could feel every moment of Sango's anguish and anger. I'm so glad her friends were there for her and that she got Kohaku back. One question: was she or wasn't she pregnant? I don't know if you left that as a cliffie or what but the last part really made you wonder if that was a big part of the last emotional breakdown. Maybe she had held out hope. This was so awesome sauce! Now, I'm going to find my tissues!
Thanks so much! I was worried that it didn't make the mark but looks like it did *smiles*
One question: was she or wasn't she pregnant? ... To be honest, it wasn't part of the plan I sketched out months ago and I haven't really decided yet. I mean, Sango is distraught and she isn't thinking straight, so she could be imagining it. To cut a long story short... yes, you could call it an evil cliffie. *smirks*
I had to be shuffled off to the ER I was wondering what happened to you... *sends you cookies and flowers* You're gonna be okay, right???!!!
I need a tissue. *hands you a box*
BB, you were so close to lemon virginity Nah, that was just limeyness... I ain't lost it yet until I write a full-blown, graphic explicit one. *snickers*
I was afraid you had run off to find a new BB. o.O
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O ye of little faith... No, I clung to my screen hoping to see any signs of life from the old one. *grins*
you'll have to go read it. *goes and reads it* ... Wow, you had a busy day. I'll go and comment more on that post in a minute.
How else will acomplish Saving the world with Mir/San™? *laughs* Another copyrighted phrase for our dictionary. Don't worry, I'm working on losing it with a bang in my next multi-chaptered story...
Oh, right. Will you be on for some time? I've finished writing the latest chapter of TGONTG but I was waiting for you before I posted it *glee*
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Whoa - was it that unexpected? I seem to have shocked quite a few by killing off Miroku (no mean feat considering how much I love him).
You did a wonderful job with it, really choked me up at the end.
Thanks so much, I was really nervous about the response to this chapter - glad to see it went down (relatively) well. Especially since you're like my writing idol and your feedback always makes me squee. *blushes*
I felt so bad for Sango, losing him after all that they'd been through.
It hurt to kill Miroku off because I was anticipating Sango's feelings T.T
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One question: was she or wasn't she pregnant?
... To be honest, it wasn't part of the plan I sketched out months ago and I haven't really decided yet. I mean, Sango is distraught and she isn't thinking straight, so she could be imagining it. To cut a long story short... yes, you could call it an evil cliffie. *smirks*
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I had to be shuffled off to the ER
I was wondering what happened to you... *sends you cookies and flowers* You're gonna be okay, right???!!!
I need a tissue.
*hands you a box*
BB, you were so close to lemon virginity
Nah, that was just limeyness... I ain't lost it yet until I write a full-blown, graphic explicit one. *snickers*
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o.O
O.o
O ye of little faith... No, I clung to my screen hoping to see any signs of life from the old one. *grins*
you'll have to go read it.
*goes and reads it* ... Wow, you had a busy day. I'll go and comment more on that post in a minute.
How else will acomplish Saving the world with Mir/San™?
*laughs* Another copyrighted phrase for our dictionary. Don't worry, I'm working on losing it with a bang in my next multi-chaptered story...
Oh, right. Will you be on for some time? I've finished writing the latest chapter of TGONTG but I was waiting for you before I posted it *glee*
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