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#017 - If you'd ask - Aiba/Nino

Oct 13, 2012 16:44

Title: If you'd ask
Pairing/s: Aiba Masaki/Ninomiya Kazunari
Prompt: Before, during, and after their first kiss; supplementary tumblr evidence post
Rating: PG
Genre: Crack, Fluff, and something I can't explain.
A.N.:
- Written for the JE ANON FIC MEME. Originally posted HERE
- I'm actually proud of this :D
- AO3 post here for people who only likes ( Read more... )

p: aiba/nino, l: oneshot, g: fluff, g: crack, group: arashi, #slash

Comments 6

aoisoranohikari October 14 2012, 06:24:44 UTC

So cute.. XDD Their first kiss was epic.. XDD

yumenosete October 14 2012, 06:43:15 UTC

Thank you very much for reading ♥

lilly0 October 14 2012, 11:29:50 UTC

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THIS HAS TO BE MY FAV AIMIYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How did you do that!? Make me all giggle and laugh at the beginning and be all melancholic and touched at the end?
It was so beautiful!

The beginning cracked me up. I mean... LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL The whole scene :D

He was already willing to trade his life in exchange of having his face drawn too when it happened: a heavy body slamming against his back, causing him to jerk forward and meet Nino’s lips.

If you’d ask Nino how his first kiss was, he’d tell you it was gross and comical.

No one would ever describe their first kiss as anything romantic in the first place when you recognize the fact that Aiba was doodling something in your face before you were stirred in your sleep. This was so brilliant!! I laughed so much! Oh Aiba :D What would have happened, if you hadn't kissed Nino accidentally? (Guess he would have needed to have his face drawn too :D ( ... )

yumenosete October 14 2012, 14:30:33 UTC

THANK YOU jafksdljfl;as /hugs YOU ARE SO SWEET WITH YOUR COMMENTS I JUST--♥

IDRK. Something possessed over me and then when I finished, I was like, "good job!" and gave myself a mental pat XD I'm actually happy with how it turned out. :)

I do think he'll have worst than just having his face drawn (although that too XD)

I know. When I was writing it, I was like, is it even right to break them up? But then this is so much better than the piece I wrote where they did end together. D:

Thank you for reading and I'm giving my love to you too ♥

br_arashi October 14 2012, 11:54:35 UTC

Aaaaawn... Cute, but...
I hoped them to stay together...

yumenosete October 14 2012, 14:25:19 UTC

uhm...sorry? :O

somehow when the story ran in my mind there was that ending where they stayed together and this. When I tried to write the former though, it didn't really satisfy me to say the least so I scrapped it.

But thank you for reading ♥