#035 - him - Ohno/Sho

[yumenosete]

Fic Title: him
Group/Pairing: Ohno Satoshi/Sakurai Sho
Rating: explicit, NC-17 or Hard R, depending on your rating system
Word Count: 6,665
Summary: Sakurai Sho finds his Virtual Assistant upgraded for free, which is more human than he wants it to be. (AU)
Notes:
- Written for the recently concluded Yamaficcon ~Proposals~ held by xrachiebunniex who was also my

Comments

[cris_kanaschiro]

This. This is the best fic I've read this year, it has an amazing plot, it was so well written and it is very captivating. I'm sorry hun, but I think you've got yourself a new stalker!

I do hope you keep writing fics for as long as you can, 'cause lately its been quite hard to find good writers like those I admired some years ago.

Thank you very much for sharing. I will probably be back on your future projects :D

[yumenosete]

You're making me blush! (*^u^*) Thank you for your praises! ♥ I don't usually write much but I'm honored that you find me worthy to stalk. And no worries, stalk away :)

I'd write for as long as time permits and inspirations strike me. Thank you so much again!
♥

[br_arashi]

Pleeeease, a sequence to that!
I know it looks perfect as it is now, but I would really love to understand and to see their first real touches...
Please? Please? Pleeeease???

[yumenosete]

I don't really have anything in mind for the sequel, but I'll think about the touches stuff (I'm not promising anything though.)

Thank you so much for reading ♥

[ext_1497137]

i really loved this. i rarely read arashi fic, and not this pairing, but the premise seemed too interesting to pass up and i'm glad i decided to check it out. everything from the formatting to the gradual built of their relationship to the background characters was fabulous. very creative and adapted to the characters perfectly.

[yumenosete]

I'm glad you read this fic too! I'm so happy you chose to read this fic even if you read Arashi. Thank you very much for the praises you have this fic! ♥

[dbskxarashi]

Omg this is so fucking good i kinda teared :"DD
TOTALLY NEEDS A SEQUEL. <3

[yumenosete]

I'm not sure I can give you a sequel (in fact, it's highly unlikely) but I'm happy you kinda teared XD

Thank you for reading and commenting ♥

[gomushroom]

I owed you a long rambling comment for this nice fic, didn't I? *facepalm.

You know what I love during my first reading; the format is lovely! I always appreciate any take on different prose formatting (since I know that writing fragmented sequences usually help fight unwanted distraction and eye-rolling busy RL of course LOL); this fic was utterly charming in its sparseness ♥!

But on the second reading, I noticed the big frame even more, "Sho-kun"! Ahhhhhhh, it made even more sense now (I was in a rush when I read this first time, shame on me). And can I be nerdy to say that I'm reading the use of brackets too much? Instead of parentheses that will signify addition (the one that doesn't need to be read should the reader not care about what's inside them, or it won't do any damage to the whole story if removed), you used brackets--pair of mark that is mainly used to enclose words added by someone (CAN IT BE SATOSHI? ASLDKJ) other than the original writer or speaker, typically in order to clarify the situation. I feel that your

[yumenosete]

No you don't! But I'm happy that you left one anyways! /dances like a fool /cartwheels

And I'm so glad that you liked the format. It wasn't really supposed to end up that way but at the beginning, I was writing the conversation between Sho and Satoshi in my phone first and in order to differentiate, I used brackets for Satoshi (which was supposed to be turned into some computer looking font). I ultimately decided that it's better to leave Satoshi's brackets in the end because I wanted to differentiate the A.I. Satoshi and the man that Sho will meet on the train later on (that and I became lazy XD) BUT YES YOU'RE A NERD I NEVER THOUGHT OF IT THAT WAY. I was ooh-ing all the time when I read your analysis about my bracket choice. I LOVE YOU ♥

and THANK YOU, someone finally said something about liking the ending as it is. and can I just say that your comment: it would not be the same if you move on to the story afterward, it'd not be the story of Satoshi, the A.I., and Sho. put me at peace. /hugs