Heroes: "After Hours" (Mylar NC-17)

[yumemiru_kikai]

Title: After Hours
Author: airspaniel
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Mylar
Word Count: 2345
Spoilers: none
Notes: The "director's cut" if you will, of Dream #2 from Five Dreams Sylar Had About Mohinder Suresh. Shameless PWP. I mean, completely unrepentant porn here.

Summary: Some things you can't control even in your own dreams.

Comments

[aunt_zelda]

Gah ... *reels backward in a smutty daze*

The windows of the cab are steamed up almost as soon as they get in, and the driver is considerate enough to slide the plexiglass panel shut, blocking out the soft noises they make sprawled across the backseat.
Heh ... that's one unfortunate/lucky cab driver right there ...

“Can I stay?” he asks. As if Sylar has any intention of ever letting him go anywhere ever again.
Awwww ...

When he wakes up the next morning, really wakes up, he remembers the dream with a stab to the gut that’s almost physical. He turns over, regarding the empty side of the bed.
He wonders, not for the first time, how different things might have been if Mohinder Suresh had ever met Gabriel Gray.
*whimper whimper*

[airspaniel]

Hee! Glad you liked it. ^_^ I always love your comments!

[aunt_zelda]

Hee! Glad you liked it. ^_^
Well, of course I did!

I always love your comments!
Awww ... *blushes and beams* Why?

[airspaniel]

I dunno... you always seem to put so much thought into them. ^_^ It's really nice to get that kind of feedback. ^_^ Also, you're always incredibly nice.

[trulydemure]

Good gods.... that was insanely delicious.

[airspaniel]

Thank you so much! ^____^

[mercaque]

WOW. That's... definitely some of the best Mylar smut I've ever read. Hot and gorgeous, really great sensual imagery.

Also, I liked seeing Mohinder as the more dominant partner, slightly uncommon for this pairing. But it does make sense given their canon characteriations and particularly the way you've sketched them both. I've always felt Sylar/Gabriel has a bit of a passive streak (he seems to seek direction from outside sources - watchmaking from his father, the "evolutionary imperative" from Chandra), while Mohinder is a more "active" character than he's often given credit for.

Oh why the hell am I babbling about characterization? That was just plain fantastic sweaty fun. Yum.

[airspaniel]

I love that you "babble" about characterization, because you picked up on the exact same things that made me write this in the first place. Sylar, for all his aggressive shows of dominance and violence, has been shown to be a character that needs someone to tell him what to do; needs validation from an outside source, whether it's Chandra, God, his mother, or Mohinder. And I can't help but imagine that deep down he would want someone to take control from him.
And Mohinder has proven himself to be more than a whiny little bitch (though he does have his moments), so there's no reason he couldn't be the aggressor in a given situation. I think the pretty makes people forget that he's just as likely to pull a gun on you as smile at you, really.

*whew* Sorry for the novel. ^^;;

Thank you so much for the comment! ^_^ I'm really glad you liked it.

[ladywilde80]

Clockwork isn’t the only rhythm Sylar understands, experience or no.

*dies*

Good lord woman, I think you killed my brain! That was so fucking hot!! Seriously, I need a cold shower and the AC on like NOW!
This was so beautifully written and hot!! oh dear lord, was that just full of hottness. BEST smut I have read in a long time!!
I heart this and your amazing skills...pure brillance! and the ending *sighs* just heartbreaking!

[airspaniel]

Hee! Awesome! Thank you so much! *^_^*

Sorry I killed your brain, though. They're overrated anyway. ^_~

[slash_gypsy04]

Woah, talk about hotness. I haven't read mylar in a week and boy, did this get me back into it with a bang. I love that this is Gabriel with Mohinder, and Gabriel is so new to the whole thing. Just lovely. :)

[airspaniel]

Hee! ^_^ Thank you so much!