Heroes: "Five Dreams Sylar Had About Mohinder Suresh" (Mylar, NC-17)

Aug 13, 2007 19:07

Title: Five Dreams Sylar Had About Mohinder Suresh
Author: airspaniel
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Mylar
Word Count: 1935
Spoilers: through "Parasite"
Notes: For the mylar_fic Summer fic-a-thon, week 5 - "smut week." And it's nearly ten days late, and I'm sorry, but yeah... hopefully it's worth the delay.

Summary: Umm... see the title. ^_~

He is standing in front of a red door. )

mylar, pwp, heroes

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metatarsus August 14 2007, 04:41:19 UTC
LOOOOOVE &hearts!

The second one is definitely my favourite, mostly for reasons people have already mentioned. I just adore Gabriel and his awkwardness hee hee.

Loved the third one too... alcohol-fueled Truth or Dare always means good times ;D

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airspaniel August 14 2007, 06:11:20 UTC
Hee! Thank you! ^___^

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angary August 14 2007, 05:50:10 UTC
Holy crap, that was hot. I really loved how you put in the fourth dream, because it was just enough to add that perfect layer of tragedy. I liked how you put this in Sylar's POV, and how you made him Gabriel in the second dream. Extremely well done! *Claps*

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airspaniel August 14 2007, 06:14:38 UTC
Thank you so much! Heh, I can't resist getting a little bit of angst in there, even if it's just a dream. ^_~

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drunken_hedghog August 14 2007, 18:14:23 UTC
I love the freedom you have when you make each scenario a dream, especially when you choose to include what could be a nightmare. And you used it all for five, truly brilliant scenarios, all of which felt believeable. Is this making sense? Ah, shove it. Basically u roxxors!

"lips like wet red sin" - I don't think I've ever been so turned on by a simile before.

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airspaniel August 14 2007, 20:08:31 UTC
Heh, I'm incredibly pleased that you think so. ^_^

And yeah... I kind of blew my own mind with that one. 0.o I still might go back and flesh that dream out some more, since it is still very much the sexy to me.

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pikapika217 August 14 2007, 20:26:38 UTC
very nice.

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airspaniel August 15 2007, 14:45:18 UTC
Thanks!

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im_meli August 15 2007, 02:01:29 UTC
Oh wow. This is wonderful!

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airspaniel August 15 2007, 14:45:55 UTC
Thank you very much!

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