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evilgeniuskoji April 3 2009, 20:24:10 UTC
Good thing I decided to skip out on class, eh ( ... )

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evilgeniuskoji April 3 2009, 20:25:01 UTC
Oh. And I'm sorry I ended up putting up all those corrections. .___. I don't normally do this.

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yumemaboroshi April 3 2009, 23:04:08 UTC
DUN DUN DUN... Uruha took you by surprise, muhahahaha!

I've been seeing 'PSC' in odd places since I started this story last year - it's insane. They're everywhere. That experiment story seems a little far-fetched. I mean, "where's the evidence", right? He did say that they had destroyed everything... right? :snorts:

[ He is. ]

I almost removed that natto joke. ALMOST. XD

Yeah, sorry about that. I'm two pages into the second part of what was supposed to be chapter six, and considering what next, I thought it would be best to stop it here.

Actually, I wanted to ask you to take a look at it today but I was too impatient in a hurry, not to mention that the file was seven pages and a half. :laughs: I edit my paragraphs so often that I always forget a word or two in the process - thanks for showing me the mistakes I made. Now I'm ready to spam a few communities :D

And remember: SKIPPING IS BAD. This is coming from a girl who hasn't gone to pronunciation lab in - oh - a month? Hahaha.

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evilgeniuskoji April 4 2009, 02:48:36 UTC
He did. I did a doubletake and went "Really?" I couldn't see Uruha as a Kenji. xD I thought it was Miyavi or something.

Nooo, do not remove the natto joke, it was hilarious. =D

Haha, I was at home all day. Too bad I didn't log on, then you might've gotten ti to me? But yeah, I get impatient too. xD Don't worry about it, go for it.

Shush, I wasn't skipping, I was sick. =D I just call it skipping.

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n3uromanc3r April 5 2009, 00:07:24 UTC
I don't think I mentioned it, but I like your layout ( ... )

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: from her other account : shii_tan April 5 2009, 10:53:57 UTC
Thank you ^_^

... and that Uruha in my head wasn't the same as the idiotic one from Aoi's sessions ...

I know, right? XD He loves to play with names - the barman called him 'Mokona' you know, the furry drunk from XxxHolic. There's no particular reason why he chose 'Kenji', though I was referring to a specific person, as a certain gesture (vaguely) indicates. I might give it away later lol.

I'm glad you percieved it that way. I wanted it to be funnier than tragic. Actually, my issues with the upcoming part has a lot to do with the non-funny side of it... -_-;

All of your questions will be answered as the story unfolds - some very shortly! I have to say that I love reading your comments. You are very observant. :D

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hereticpop April 17 2009, 12:36:14 UTC
yay, I finally got to reading this!

first thing: Kenji was Uruha? O.O that's a surprise! I feel like I'll have to re-read all the chapters and try to hunt for all the little details that time erased from my memory to have a more complete insight on things. I will definitely.

but one thing I have to say: I absolutely love your Uruha. I'm really happy that he hijacked the chapter because his appearance and a failed attempt at a conversation with Ruki was my favourite part. he's so random, so crazy. and cherries, yay for cherries! but it seems that things get more mysterious again and just when I thought I followed everything that was going on, some strange things pop up. so intriguing~ and I can't wait to read more about Uruha. :D

other than Uruha, something I'd like to mention is Ruki and his plan. there's something about it... I don't know. it's funny and sad at the same time. I think it's this line: I had to admit that there was something a little disappointing about the banality of death that sums it up in a perfect way. and Ruki ( ... )

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yumemaboroshi April 18 2009, 16:37:27 UTC
I'm pleasantly surprised that the revelation surprised everyone. :D

Uruha had one single line as his official self so far (the very last line of chapter one nonetheless) and it was time for a proper introduction. He's so weird. He never wants to shut up. Sometimes, I wonder if he really should be saying those things and... yes. He rocks. :giggles and gets excited for no apparent reason:

Don't worry. Step seven will pick up where this one left off. Then that thing will happen and everything will go down the wtf road again; but once Ruki will stop trying to find the logic behind it and start looking for answers instead, the real fun will begin. :grins:

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ahmtal April 19 2009, 22:13:05 UTC
"Don't mention it. In other circumstances, I would be thanking you for being such a good client."
it's like it's written on his forehead >.>

Ruki's grand finale
*rolls eyes* on s'amuse comme on peut...

"As you wish, Mokona-san."
roflmaolololol
which mokona could he be? black: drunkard taking everything as a joke. white: drinkard with 108 secret skills.
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this is hard X3

"Ah, um... Right." He carelessly removed the Hello, my name is Kenji sticker from his shirt and stuck it on the underside of his stool.
of course he's uruha, who else?

"I am not his friend," I repeated. "Don't believe anything he says."
lmao

About eight years ago, they released an upgraded version in Belgium and Luxemburg called Lanu, Nanu - something like that.
if the coca-cola company hear about that...

"Natto?"
A woman two seats away chocked on her martini. Uruha's scrutinized my face in silence. He looked really embarrassed by my ignorance in foreign politics.if i was drinking my glass of milk when i read that one, i'm sure i would have spit it from the ( ... )

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ahmtal September 18 2009, 12:56:30 UTC
D: t'as pas répondu!
and where the hell are you?!

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yumemaboroshi September 18 2009, 14:43:07 UTC
JE SUIS DESOLEE OMG. C'EST INACCEPTABLE. D:

... et je me souviens d'avoir bien rigolé en lisant ton commentaire sur Ni~ya! lol Je suis trop méchante, pardon, pardon, pardon.

En ce qui concerne Mokona... au début, je pensais qu'il serait noir, mais il y a un peu de blanc dedans. Alors il serait gris? lol

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14eyes March 21 2011, 03:24:58 UTC
oh Kenji is uruha. How did I not see that coming. The interaction between Ruki and Uruha was INSANELY hilarious... when I came to PSCrap I sniggered out loud. Uruha's such an nutcase, I love him.

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yumemaboroshi March 22 2011, 16:45:59 UTC
I had a lot of fun writing the bar scene. :D

Thank you for reading.

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