The taming of the shrew: Chapter 16 (Sakumoto)

Nov 20, 2016 18:43

Title: The taming of the shrew: Chapter 16/18
Pairing: Sakumoto
Rating: R/NC-17 (not in every chapter though)
Genre: smut, romance, bit angst (no AU setting)
Plot: Is it love or hate or attraction? They share a history of ups and downs, from teenage crushes over not talking at all to accepting each other’s presence. Finally, six months ago, Sho ( Read more... )

series: the taming of the shrew, genre: smut, p: matsumoto jun/sakurai sho, r: nc-17, l: multi-chapter, genre: romance

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koi_choshi November 21 2016, 01:57:03 UTC
Ahhh I've been waiting for this *rolls*

I was pleasantly surprised at the length of this chapter! Toshida is so great and so cute when he suddenly shifts his behavior when talking to either Jun or Sho. I'm glad that they're now more open to each other. And it's nice to hear Jun's thoughts about the mind games thing (thanks to Toshida being so cool and all).

I wonder if the family dinner shows up here... and the vacation with only the two of them *wriggles eyebrows*

Interestingly, this chapter also made me realize that the whole story is really in Jun's POV. That we cannot really see Sho's thoughts unless Jun hears it. I like it this way. :3 Thanks for this!

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lilly0 November 27 2016, 19:25:16 UTC
I'm so happy you like Toshida. He knows pretty well how to talk to the both of them and make them open up *lol* The vacation with just the both of them... I wouldn't miss writing about that opportunity :D

True, I never switched POVs here, right? I remember, when I started this, I wanted to keep this in one POV entirely ^^

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!! ♥

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southview November 21 2016, 03:08:13 UTC
Toshida-sensei's reaction was priceless. I love him so much! Although for me, he doesn't look like a therapist but more like Jun's friend to talk with. Ah, that scene where they have to pretend to be each other is something surprising for me. I guess Sho coudn't forgive himself that easily too. Nevertheless, good thing that their relationship is getting better each day and I'm still laughing that Toshida-sensei scolded Sho in every session XD How masochist are you Sho? But he deserves it after what he had done to Jun.

I hope that the trip is going well between the two. More like, I hope there are no problem and any mental breakdown between the two (especially Jun because he's in his vulnerable state). Once again, thank you for the update! I really love your stories <3

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lilly0 November 27 2016, 19:26:23 UTC
Thanks so much for your lovely comment!! ♥

Haha, yes, I guess you are right. Toshida comes off as a good buddy. But maybe that's his strategy? :D You are right though, Sho can't forgive himself easily, but he is on a good way now :-)

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mae74 November 21 2016, 09:54:36 UTC
Such a great chapter as they are moving forward together - I hope nothing bad happens on the trip!

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lilly0 November 27 2016, 19:27:08 UTC
Thanks so much for reading and commenting!! ♥
The trip... well... they have learned a lot up to now, so let's see where it brought them ^^

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yukitsubute November 22 2016, 19:20:39 UTC

Their therapy session together was really intense. It's really interesting how they see each other :(
But now they can work on their relationship, it's getting better between them, and that's good.

Oh I am looking forward to their vacation - I hope that they don't fight there and just have fun with each other :P

Thanks for the update, dear ❤

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lilly0 November 27 2016, 19:27:48 UTC
Thanks so much for reading and commenting, dear!! ♥

Everyone seems to be worried about their vacation ;-) Well, let's see what they are going to do (fun might play a big part in it ^^)

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aosakumoto November 23 2016, 05:06:53 UTC

Welcome back~...... Hope you have great time during your vacation..😆😆😆😆

Wow..... Toshida sensei sooo greaatt!!!! Hahahahhahaha i love their progress now.. And cause i know now about sho why he do that i have less hate toward him hahahahahahha

Kkkkkkk juuunn.... Your so kind n sweeet wkwkwkwkkwk about "dont be so hard to him" wkwkwkkwkkw......

Wow!!! Id love to read your fic again n again hehehehhhee thanks for sharing 😘😘😘😘

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lilly0 November 27 2016, 19:28:56 UTC
I'm so happy you like Toshida-sensei <3
They finally making some progress, right? And Sho could finally explain a few things. He should watch out from now on though and be a good boyfriend ;-)
Thanks so much for reading and commenting!! ♥

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