Struggles (SMAP)

[lilly0]

Title: Struggles
Pairing/Group: young!SMAP, focus on 2Top and Mori, but also appearances by the others
Rating: PG
Beta: ivenclaire
Genre: friendship, a little angst
Summary: Takuya doesn’t even know why he feels that tired. It’s as if he hasn’t slept for weeks.
Note: Loosely related to the "I hate you" incident between 2Top, also mentions of the "you get on

Comments

[tomokins]

Hello! I've read all your SMAP fics and your News fics before and I've never commented on them but I can't hold my tongue any longer for this one xD.
First, I love that you wrote 6 nin Smap <3 I haven't read Mori in a fic in a while so this was a plesant surprise x3 also my fav pairing 2top! I love how you've written everyone here esp Kimura as angsty as he is and then Mori and Nakai trying to calm him down is just asdfghjkl!!♥ I love your fics btw~ I wish I could write this well xD also my name's Chelsea! Since we haven't met before I don't think^^;

[lilly0]

Thanks so much for your lovely comment! I was really happy to see it in my inbox ♥ There aren't enough SMAP fics currently, which is pretty sad, the happier I am that you dropped by here and commented on mine!
And yeah, Kimura was pretty angsty as a teenager, wasn't he? Well, all of them were ^^

PS:
My name is Lilly (well, pretty obvious ^^). It's nice to meet you!

[ao_hiji]

Well well look who's here again, wrote another GREAT fic of SMAP!!!
YAY I LOVE YOU ISI-CHAN <333

I'm sorry that I haven't found time to comment on this. And thanks for your kind message, it reminds me that I haven't comment in here <333

First of all, thank you for writing 6SMAP fic! It's been a long time since I read any 6SMAP fic!

I love the way you focused on Mori! No one really care about him since he quit SMAP. And that Takuya is just soooooooo Takuya <333

Then here it comes!! My lovely 2TOP WOHOOOO
“If you continue apologizing now-“ Takuya interrupts him. “I swear I’m never going to stop laughing.”
Just as we can expected from Takuya! Harsh but sweet comment came from him <3

And then!! I love the last line so much!!!
Takuya grabs the hand Nakai is offering him. He smiles. “Count me in.”
OKAY YES. I CAN IMAGINE IT SO CLEAR IN MY HEAD. YES. YES.

Thank you for another wonderful work, girl ;)

More 2TOP will be *coughs* appreciated *coughs* <333

Did I say I love you? I LOVE YOU *huggles*

[lilly0]

Thanks so much for your lovely comment! I was honestly totally surprised by it <3 THANKS!!

Well, at that time they were six, right? :D So I had no reason to leave Mori out (plus, I like him. ^^)

2TOP is such an interesting pair. I imagine them arguing a lot but also having a mutual understanding.
And Takuya...was just kinda angsty as a teenager *lol* But all of them somehow were, right? :-)

Thanks again for reading and commenting!! ♥♥♥

[yukitsubute]

SMAAAPPP....<3 It's so rare to read.

I totally loved that, especially because there was also Mori included. I don't know him well, but I like him. <3
I love how they characterized themselves. ^^ They aren't perfect at all, but all in all they are good guys, and they made it together for a long time :D

Thanks for sharing <3

[lilly0]

Thanks for your comment, dear! *huggles*

SMAP fics really get rare (which means you should write one as well!!!!! :D)

I like Mori too. I'm not sure how to characterize him though because he wasn't with SMAP that long, but... whatever *lol*

[sweetspicyhot]

I love your fics in general you know! And even though I don't know SMAP hardly at all, I enjoyed this one as well. I love the subtle interactions between group members. Hate is such a strong word, no wonder it hurt Kimura so much. But it seems he was a bit moody as well. Great job! Hugs to you!

[lilly0]

Thanks so much for your lovely comment, my friend! *hugs*
I'm really happy that you enjoyed reading this though you don't know much about the group ♥