Matsumoto's shop of hopes and dreams - enter on your own risk: Chapter 1

[lilly0]

Title: Matsumoto’s shop of hopes and dreams - enter on your own risk 1/13
Pairing: Sakumoto, Aimiya, (hints of past(?)Ohmiya and Matsumiya and Juntoshi? (but... well... you'll get it, when you read it. It's not a love triangle or anything, it's rather plot-relevant)
Rating: up to R
Genre: AU, romance, fantasy (it sounds superduper-magic-and-fantasy

Comments

[aosakumoto]

Oww.. Ow...oww..... This is really amazing😆😆😆😆
With jun can do like in a magic nor what this is called.. .
And nino is the jun's friend/protection/fob😋😋
Aaaaaand caring sho!!😱😱😱😱 hahahahahhahah...... Hmmmmm but where the aiba and ohno???? Kkkkkk.....
I cant wait for the next thank you and fightiiiiing!!!!!😘😘😘😘😘

[lilly0]

Yes, Jun can do 'magic' - it's not really magic, but... well... I'll reveal it step by step, I promise :D
There will be a lot of twists by the way, and I hope you'll like it <3
Thanks so much for your lovely comment!! ♥♥

[leiva21]

Fantasy is a genre that I always like and this first chapter is so well written I can easily imagine the world where you can buy sunshine. Furthermore, it's Jun who actually sells it, to Sho who is helping a kid. Nino's relationship with Jun is interesting too, how Nino is so protective of Jun
This story has a great premise and I can't wait to read more

[lilly0]

Really? I'm so happy you like this genre, because it's one of my favs to write :D The characters are all connected to each other, and Nino's and Jun's story will definitely play an important part ;-)
Thanks so much for your lovely comment! ♥

[yukitsubute]

This is really interesting, but the thing which runs through my head: When did I say this? *lol* But it's great that I could give you an input for a story ^^

The beginning is really interesting, and I wonder what will go on here and what Jun and Nino are and what's their power. The whole setting reminds me of Pet shop of Horrors :)

Thanks for this first chapter, I am really curious about the next ones. <3

[lilly0]

Thanks so much for reading, dear! (and yes, we talked about buying sunshine :D)
This is probably going in a more fantasy-ish and fairy-tale-ish direction. (Petshop of Horrors! I thought about it too!! But it's just the first chpater that gives this vibe ^^)

[perkyandproud]

Oooo, I like this!

Nino is Jun's....supplier. Got it! :)

I can't wait to see what happens next!

The rules make sense when you understand the underlying bit about Jun just...moving things from one place to another. If you win the lottery, that means the person who was supposed to didn't. If you kill someone, does that mean that someone else didn't die? That's a LOT of pressure on a magic user!

[lilly0]

Thanks soooo mcuh for giving this a go! I hope you'll also like the other chapters <3
The rules do make sense, right? I mean, to imagine what you could do and wish for...