Comments | yume16: Fanfic: Shattered

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Fanfic: Shattered

Feb 13, 2013 22:13

Title: Shattered
Author: yume16
Disclaimer: If the boys were mine they would be married. Obviously, they are not *duhhhhh*
Beta: She is busy again^^
Pairing(s): Kita.....fuji
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst!
Warnings: This is not a Valentine's fic! Pure angst! An inappropriate time to post this, I know. Rather short by the way.
Summary: Kitayama makes a ( Read more... )

hiro, taisuke, one-shot, pg, kitafuji, fanfic

Comments 8

airifan February 13 2013, 21:42:11 UTC

Ohhh Gott... Wieso so ne unschöne fan fic kurz vor Valentinstag.... Ist ja gemein...schnief ....da wird man ja echt traurig....wäh

yume16 February 16 2013, 19:00:51 UTC

Tja, Ich habe euch gewarnt^^
Letztes Jahr habe ich eine nette fanfic für diesen Tag geschrieben, dieses Jahr eine traurige. Wäre doch sonst langweilig :P

airifan February 16 2013, 19:02:36 UTC

Kriegen sie sich denn wieder? ;P
ha ha... sonst muss ich echt noch in die Ecke weinen gehen... XD

yume16 February 21 2013, 21:15:14 UTC

Ich weiß es noch nicht XD
Ich habe zwar Ideen wie die Fic weitergehen kann, aber das Ende entscheide ich immer während des Schreibprozess.
Tut mir leid, ich kann es die leider nicht sagen...aber vielleicht schreibe ich an der Fic ja mal weiter wenn ich endlich ein bisschen mehr Zeit habe^^
Nicht weinen <3

racanai February 13 2013, 23:13:02 UTC

I wonder who is more stubborn, Fujigaya or his heart. Because I have the feeling that Kitayama just wanted to talk, not to break up. But I love their misery! ♥ I'm a bad person, I know! XD

yume16 February 16 2013, 19:04:18 UTC

Hm, that is a very interesting question you are asking there. I am going to ponder this ;) Well, I wonder what he wanted...;)
Even though I am mostly a 'happy ending person' I had a lot of fun to write their misery...I guess you are not the only bad person here

sweetspicyhot February 14 2013, 03:02:58 UTC

I love the angst--this is so good. I do want a sequel where they make up and smut it out. But Fujigaya's heartache was so piercingly real. I just--so good.

And really it is appropriate for Valentine's day which is full of loneliness, heartache and pain for a lot of people. I bet those people would rather read something like this than all that romantic crap.

Anyway good job! <3

Hugs to you!

yume16 February 16 2013, 19:10:50 UTC

Thank you! I am still hesitant to write angst. Actually, I wanted to write more at first (as in make this a longer story), but I suddenly felt this was a rather good post the way it is. Though, the ideas are still there. Maybe if I have the time to write it, I will^^
I am glad you think so...I really wondered whether I could bring his feelings across.

I never looked at it that way. Thank you. This is very true *hugs*

<3