Fanfic: Let's be detectives

Feb 25, 2012 19:29


Title: Let's be detectives!
Author: yume16
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hiro, taisuke, one-shot, kitafuji, pg-13, fanfic

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First spot for my beta because Koyama said so yume16 February 25 2012, 19:35:42 UTC
Here is your spot and I added NEWS for you like you wished. I'm sorry that it is mainly Koyama and a little Shige. Two members are missing -.-

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Re: First spot for my beta because Koyama said so blursakana February 29 2012, 16:45:02 UTC
Aye aye ayeee~!
I don't know how many times I have professed my love for you. Upon my extremely selfish request, you really complied!! OMG, I LOVE you! Its ok ! It was really out of the blue!!

I have always loved beta-ing your fics!~ :D because they are the best XD

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Re: First spot for my beta because Koyama said so yume16 March 1 2012, 20:03:13 UTC
XD well, let's say I do a lot to make you happy ;) You know how much I love it to make others smile.
You know I love you, too~

There are probably much better writers around here, but I'm smiling like crazy at the moment! *hugs*
<3

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sweetspicyhot February 25 2012, 20:20:23 UTC
Here I am. Spot!

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yume16 February 25 2012, 20:23:29 UTC
Fast as always ;)

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sweetspicyhot February 27 2012, 07:08:45 UTC
i think this is the first Kis-my-ft2 fic that i have commented on. This one was so sweet, my favorite part was when Taisuke had tried so hard to play along and not give himself away, and then he says simply “If I had known what a mess it would cause I would have never made that damn chocolate.” Oh and who is standing in the doorway.:D

But such member-ai, I feel like i need to pay more attention to them ne. Do they really fall down a lot? i love how Kitayama keeps the paper heart in his wallet. Little touches like that are why your fics are so good.

i love their innocent first kiss and how Taisuke is out of breath, And of course the end is perfect with their shocked bandmates finding them. Lovely!

Hugs and hearts :D:D:D<3<3<3

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yume16 February 27 2012, 14:41:42 UTC
Wow, I feel very honoured now because it is the first one! This makes me so happy.
He was very unlucky that it had to be Hiro of all people, but let's call it fate ;)

Yeah, it's really cute how they act around each other. I don't think I could ship a group with no member-ai at all. They really fall a lot. I saw the making of their first music video and couldn't help but think that they would be bruised the following days.
I can't help it. I just love such little elements XD

I thought a passionate kiss wouldn't have fit ;) Thanks a lot! I'm really happy you liked it.

<3

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pookapooh February 26 2012, 17:13:20 UTC
I really love this fic, ever read a hirosuke's fanfic so cute like this before.
thanks, it makes me so happy XD

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yume16 February 27 2012, 14:42:48 UTC
Thank you! I'm really happy to hear that <3
Glad, I made you happy!
:)

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juddyjudd February 26 2012, 19:12:51 UTC
Oh... I love it!!! thank youuuuuu!!!!!!
I actually started reading it last night, while partying, but I couldn't continue and today... i reread it.. and oh gosh... I do remember, though, that last night I started to smile and feel sad in a point (when the girl thing) while I was reading it...
now I want more HiroSuke heheheh

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yume16 February 27 2012, 14:47:02 UTC
I am glad :)
You started reading it during a party? LOL That's interesting. Well, I couldn't make it too easy for him but I'm happy you could feel the emotions.
Hmm, I am thinking about writing them again. They are actually pretty fun to write :)

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juddyjudd February 27 2012, 23:02:02 UTC
yeah... during a carnival party, actually.... the thing is that my friend needed time to talk to this guy she's "going out" with, and just 3 of us know it, so when we met them I was like... talk to him... and I logged into livejournal and saw it lol.... i could't helo it...
I actually would love to read something else about them if you write it hehehhe (maybe like something that has to do with this one.... for example XD) it's just that I like the line that you've been writtng about!

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yume16 March 1 2012, 20:05:17 UTC
LOL that's cool.
Hmm, I'm sure I'll write them again...and maybe something that has to do with this. I'm a little busy at the moment though :) But I always write when I am supposed to do something else ;)

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9aba March 3 2012, 14:30:24 UTC
UWAAAAHHHH I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I SOOOOO LOVE IT!!!
thank you soooo much!! Detectives? XD Typical Kisumai^^ Lol
I love Kitayama in the end! And Tai-chan's sooo adorable when he found out Hiro liked him back XD

Once again Thank you! It's awesome :D

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yume16 March 4 2012, 15:23:12 UTC
Hahaha, thank you very much! I'm so happy you like it.
I'm relieved they look like Kiusmai. I only got recently into them so they are pretty new to me.
I couldn't help but write Tai-chan adorable ;)

Thanks for reading! I'm really happy because of your comment :)

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9aba March 4 2012, 15:41:50 UTC

Lol! Don't worry! I'm not that experienced with Kisumai myself XD But we'll both get there won't we? ;) :D
Ofcourse you could'nt stop Taipi's cuteness XD

More than happy to read ^^

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yume16 March 4 2012, 15:46:29 UTC
Yeah, we have a lot of time. They started their amazing career just now (okay, not really, but it hasn't been long since they debuted XD)

Yeah, when ever I see a pic of him I want to pinch his cheeks. He should hope that he never meets me XD

<3

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