TVXQ Fic - Superstar Chapter 16

[yukisenshi]

Title: Superstar part 16
Genre: romance, drama, failed comedy, yaoi, fluff, smut (future if I can do it)
Pairing: YooSu, YunJae, MinxOC (YunJi)

Summary:  Junsu just came back from Japan to start a new life in Seoul. He had too much memories he would rather leave behind and he knows he can start anew in the land where he was born. Jaejoong is a

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[missyoosu]

"you’re lucky I love you or I would have just pushed you to the wall and had my way with you already.”
Whoo! *fans self* That's hot just thinking about it!

"I don’t believe that a lot of time is needed for someone to be precious to you.”
Ooh, I like that quote!

Question about the very last sentence: Did you mean to say "one of them has a blank look on his face while the other had an angry look" instead of while the other has a look of anguish? I ask b/c "anguish" means "severe mental or physical pain or suffering" which isn't the same as being angry.

[yukisenshi]

ooh you're right.... I think that's because of the autocorrect thing on Word... =.= I mispelled it initially and used the autocorrect feature.

Thanks for pointing it out. ^^

[missyoosu]

No problem.

Jaejoong is having a great day with the love of his life! Lucky!

[yukisenshi]

yeah..not everyone gets that chance.. ^^

[ieie_luph]

ooh.. who found junsu?
junsu, love yoochun back
so you can happy ever after :D

[redladymoon]

So it looks like the Black Rose found Junsu. All characters are in place now let the action begin. Yunho and Jaejoong are cute, Changmin and Yunji crack me up. Can't wait for more. Well yes I can.

[yukisenshi]

thank you for reading... this is probably the most complex of all I've written so I appreciate all the comments I get. ^^

[5_dreamchaser]

uh-oh...
trouble is coming!