Hard Hand to Hold - Twelve

Jul 21, 2009 11:44



Chapter Twelve:

“Waiting for the sun to rise, watching as the moon surrenders.”

Shige:

Snowflakes glisten in front of me as I wait for Koji at our usual meeting spot a few days later.  There’s something about watching the snow at night that always fascinates me.  Some complain about the cold but if it wasn’t cold, the pretty snowflakes so many ( Read more... )

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desirer91 July 21 2009, 17:16:32 UTC
Read both chapters...loving the way you decided to end (*sigh*) this story...
It's much simpler than the one you had in mind when we talked, but making it like this, a spontaneous decision made by Shige is great.
I loved the whole renovation thing...I think it really means something to change the setting...
I think seeing what's gonna happen to them during the change of the seasons is great, because I'd like to see how Shige's gonna cope with Ryo's job (hope you're gonna cover that topic^^).
Bye,
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yukinonamida July 21 2009, 17:23:28 UTC
Yeah, I decided this was the better route since I wanted it to be Shige's choice not "Oh, Koji did that to me so we're over...might as well go back to Ryo."

Yeah, it's really a new beginning for everything.

I think the seasons chapter will tie up all the loose ends.

Thanks for your review~ ^^

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jtriskell July 21 2009, 19:43:13 UTC
yukinonamida July 21 2009, 19:45:33 UTC
Thank you ^^ I'm glad you liked it :D

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unlostwanderer July 21 2009, 20:30:41 UTC
This is a fantastic closing to this story. I enjoyed every up and down in Ryo and Shige's relationship, whether it be when they were together or trying to be just friends.

I would not be opposed to reading a "seasons" chapter or an epilogue.

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yukinonamida July 21 2009, 20:39:37 UTC
Thanks for reading~ I'm glad you enjoyed the journey. :D

I'll be working on it^^

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fairy_illusions July 21 2009, 21:03:34 UTC
I feel so bad for Koji (yes I know, me feeling bad for someone that's not RyoShige...gasp!) but I mean Shige did/still likes him, just that Shige can't really let go of Ryo. As for Ryo-chan...I don't know. I feel like he likes Shige, but also just wants Shige's presence there. It still feels like Shige will be the one putting out more in this new relationship of theirs. BUT! It's RyoShige and happy RyoShige endings plus adorable get-togethers are always winsome :D

Yay for additional chapter to come, yes? :D

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yukinonamida July 21 2009, 21:39:01 UTC
Yeah, I was kind of upset writing the part with Koji. x_x Hmm yeah, it does seem like that in a way. It's definitely far from perfect right now but give Ryo some time :p

Yup, now I have to make everyone believe that Ryo was the right choice :)

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snake68 July 21 2009, 21:28:04 UTC
Finally together~
I really like this story and it seems that Shige finally realized his feeling <3
Seasons chapter seems pretty interesting too. I wonder what they will be doing then... <3

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yukinonamida July 21 2009, 21:40:40 UTC
Yup~ All the things that he kept telling himself to avoid became less important.

I'm not exactly sure but for summer I'll probably do something with Shige's Birthday as a belated present fic ;)

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