Snow and Ash - Fourteen

Nov 18, 2009 21:26

Koyama:

A few days later

I close the door behind me as quietly as possible though there’s really no point - every night we all go to sleep knowing who is here and who isn’t.

The gesture is made even more pointless by the fact that Shige’s looking at me from the couch over the rim of the cup he’s holding.

“Waiting up for me?” I ask jokingly. ( Read more... )

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x5yn4k4x November 19 2009, 04:06:45 UTC
*weignalrktnalxkcjbnvreku*

That is all.

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yukinonamida November 19 2009, 12:28:47 UTC
Sometimes a keysmash says it all ^^;

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ohkuramegan November 19 2009, 07:50:22 UTC
:O

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yukinonamida November 19 2009, 12:29:25 UTC
:3

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ohkuramegan November 19 2009, 19:14:46 UTC
XD

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xyabux November 19 2009, 08:57:53 UTC
Eeeeeh?!?!!? O____O What a? o_o *stears* I don't know what to say... o: Updatet more soon please~ :)

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yukinonamida November 19 2009, 12:30:40 UTC
I'll try to start writing 15 as soon as I have free time ^^;

Thanks for reading~ :D

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denkira November 19 2009, 09:08:57 UTC
Ahhh, no fair, I want moooore!! This is getting so unbeliavably interesting that my heart raced up when I saw there was a new chapter *____* And now I'm sooo eager to read the next one!!

I just don't understand - does Koyama know that they're keeping Yamapi but he can't help him? Because they said something like that, but I didn't understand...Awww, and is it possible that by the touch of Kumiko, he's now fully cursed again??? I love how this is going *___*

Keep it, it's as amazing as always *_____* ♥

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yukinonamida November 19 2009, 12:38:03 UTC
:D That makes me so happy~

Oh, sorry I wasn't clear. No, Koyama doesn't know where Yamapi is. None of them do. Yamapi was just saying that once Shiku revealed themselves, Koyama would know that Yamapi didn't really say those things to him because he wanted to. And therefore KoyamaP would get back together and the part of Shiku's plan to guilt Ryo into it would be ruined. But her response was that she (Shiori) would make Yamapi believe (like she has been doing) that he doesn't love Koyama when he is around him. So, Koyama would know that Yamapi is being messed with but he can't do anything to help him. He'd just continue being hurt.
It didn't happen yet, they were just talking about what would happen once the others found out that Shiku is behind everything.

And yes, he's fully cursed again :3

I'm glad you're enjoying it! ^_^ Hopefully I was able to clear things up but if not I'll try to explain more clearly :)

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denkira November 19 2009, 18:32:39 UTC
Aah, it's not that you didn't make it clear, I'm just a bit slow that's it XD I get it now, but I still can't see how breaking KoyaPi would make Ryo feel guilty and wanting to pass the curse, when he knows nothing about Yamapi?

Ahh, this is so so interesting!! I just love the way you write it when Ryo and Shige fight *__* I'm a sucker for angst XD It's amazing *___*

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yukinonamida November 19 2009, 19:23:15 UTC
He doesn't know anything about Yamapi yet :)

:D

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yukinonamida November 19 2009, 12:45:02 UTC
Sorry :( It really is complicated x_X

I'll try to summarize.

Mika = Kumiko and she made it so Ryo couldn't refuse her and gave him the full curse back. Yamapi is still being held somewhere by Shiku and Shiku broke KoyamaP up to make Ryo feel guilty. Shige is upset because Ryo is with Mika all the time even after they talked it over. And Ryo bumped into Aoi - first touch - and helped her up - second touch. Since he was fully cursed the moment he left Mika/Kumiko, they didn't have to be 10seconds long to count. So, Aoi got the popularity and riches.

He officially got the full curse back when his eyes became fully black again.

Hopefully that cleared things up ^^ If not, I can try again :)

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yukinonamida November 19 2009, 14:29:46 UTC
:D I'm glad.

Yeah, he didn't want to kiss her. She basically forced him to.

I will try ^^;

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