Snow and Ash - Eleven Part 2

Oct 21, 2009 19:27

Shige:

When I hand in my papers, all I can think about are warm baths and the word relax repeats in my head as I routinely go through the rest of the day. It is rather uneventful, and Koyama and I make plans to go out to eat again tonight.

To: Ryo

I made plans with Kei-chan to eat tonight~ No instant noodles (~’A’)

I will see you when I get ( Read more... )

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yukinonamida October 22 2009, 02:35:52 UTC
Go right ahead. She needs a reality check D:

Well, Shiku can only really directly affect Ryo (like putting the thought in his head about Shige and some other guy)...the only reason Shige was affected was because Shiku's power overwhelmed him.

More KoyaPi next chapter~

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sheichan18 October 22 2009, 07:36:38 UTC
i am sooo hungry while reading this.. lol..

this is a great chapter.. finally the yinyang sisters are back.. lol..
i sort of wondered where they went..
anyway,, this chap is long but i have to say one of my fave chaps yet,, really nice flow events now, it's getting me excited to read the next chappie.. :D update soon okay?! ♥

i was kind of thinking maybe ryo should pass the curse but it's kind of sad if he does that though, it's like the curse can never stop or something if he passes it the twins will leave longer.. but oh well..

and hooray for ryoshige again! sadly i can't say the same for koyapi though, any chance they'd be happy? rofl.. XD

yyyuuuuukkkiii,, ilu♥ this is my fave long chappie!

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sheichan18 October 22 2009, 07:38:38 UTC
gaa stupidity.. that's suppose to be "LIVE not leave.." this is what happens when you comment w/o food in your tummy.. forgive me and my fail.. lol... yaay~

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yukinonamida October 22 2009, 11:36:03 UTC
D: I hope you had some good food~

Yup, they are. They were around, but I didn't want them to come back until things settled and we had a bit of RyoShige happiness. xD One after the other would be too much.

I really should make the chapters shorter and just have more of them. D; But I'm glad you liked it ^_^ I wasn't feeling too confident about this one. I probably can't update again until next week sometime; I have things to do for school. >_< I wish this could be my homework instead but...

If he does pass the curse, it will be extremely hard for him. Ending it has always been his dream and it would be the best revenge. I'll touch on that more in the beginning of the next chapter, but it's not easy knowing that to save himself (or in this case, Shige) he potentially hurt several others in the future and also gave Shiku what she wanted.

Next chapter...eh, not too happy. But it gets better towards the end of it.

:D <3

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sheichan18 October 22 2009, 13:39:25 UTC
homg..,,,.. next week?!!! gaa~ okay, i'll just wait for it then,, goodluck on homework! ♥

yeah, exactly, ryo's been wanting to hold on to the curse for quite sometime coz he doesn't want other people to get affected by it anymore.. it's just sad though coz he has to hurt shige in the process.. :((

i won't mind if it isn't going to be that happy just as long as the ENDING is.. hahhaha.. :D

and yuki, i want to see koyama smile.. ♥

i already ate! yaay for my tummy!! lol

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ohkuramegan October 22 2009, 07:44:01 UTC
I'm really excited for the real story to begin :D
I hope yamapi and koyama get back together soon!
Please udate soon ^^

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yukinonamida October 22 2009, 11:38:45 UTC
Me too :D

It feels like forever since they've been together. D:

Thanks for reading~ ^^ I'll try my best

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2morrow_is_now October 22 2009, 13:21:55 UTC
ryo finally wants to get rid of the curse seriously?
is he going to pass it on? nah~...

and shiku.

and yamapi really needs to stop playing games and crawl back to kei-chan.
wait, he isn't under some mind control thingie too?

&hearts

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yukinonamida October 22 2009, 13:39:45 UTC
He thinks Shiku is going to end up killing Shige to get what she wants, so...D:

Shige wouldn't be making him do that D:

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2morrow_is_now October 22 2009, 16:28:00 UTC
oh, right.
he'll protect shige at all costs right?

and i don't think shige will be very happy with all this, since he went back and got his power just so that he could be with ryo and now ryo's gonna do something. something stupid, even?

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rainy_fruit October 22 2009, 21:25:48 UTC
Wah this is such a good chapter! Our poor boys are suffering (yet again), and it's breaking my heart! =( I hope Ryo and Shige's strength will get them through this without too much agony!!

Damn Shiku, you bitch.

Can't wait to read the next chapters; thank you for this!

~Kat

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yukinonamida October 22 2009, 21:38:48 UTC
:D I'm happy to hear that you liked it~ ^^ Everything they've been through has certainly made them stronger. :)

I can't wait to write them~ If only school wasn't in the way. ;(

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