Snow and Ash - Nine Part 2

[yukinonamida]

Ryo:

I reach into my pocket and feel around for the familiar shape of the key I haven’t used since I packed up some of Shige’s clothes to send to him right after XMA. When I open the door, I remove my shoes and Shige calls to me from where he is standing in front of a sink full of dishes.

“When did you have time to dirty all of these? I’m

Comments

[sanshinyia]

i kind of understand now why you'd be embarrassed about posting this :D not that there would be any need to be embarrassed, but anyway xD

so this is why kei-chan's upset :o *points to the part where he recalls the conversation with reiko* those two are really making it hard for themselves~ :'D but i still have faith in that flame of love of theirs! don't let me down, flame of love! XD

as for mika...o_O she should go and have fun with tako. both of them are messing up ryoshige's relationship~ XD

the ending's cute &hearts yey for ryoshige "bonding"! XD
don't be scared, i liked it!:D i don't know what you want me to say to give you more confidence though xD
but you know, this chapter reminds me a little bit of "if only i had..."~ ^^

[yukinonamida]

:3

Yup~ Lol you and that flame of love. XD

Tako has been staying away recently though. :D No one likes him. xD Poor him.

Thanks~ I tried...and it just became really mushy. xD My style hasn't changed much I guess~ IOIH was full of RyoShige gushyness. Maybe that's why? Or I'm very repetitive. X_X

[yukinonamida]

Unless you mean like Mika = Asami and the whole "Will you stay tonight" thing...I can see the similarities...but it won't stay that way for long. xD

*hates that I can't edit comments on this account* D:

[sanshinyia]

that flame of love is all your fault; you wrote that conversation between kei-chan and shige which made me get stuck with it! XD

he has, but still :D *pats tako and gives him nuts* for some reason, probably because of the name, i can't help but think of him as a squirrel....x_X' XDDD

not that you're repetitive, it's both the gushyness + mika = asami :D i love ryoshige gushyness btw &hearts

*nods* it's the curse of basic account XD

[denkira]

It's soo good ^^ I'm soo happy you've made such an awesome sequel to my favourite story! I can't see what happens to Mika though, as well as Koyama and Pi! Keep this up, you're making me so happy *__*

[yukinonamida]

:D Hearing that makes me really happy ^_^

I don't think anyone can predict what will happen to all of them at this point. But all the seeds have been planted, so to speak. ^_^ <3

[mahalkita57]

Beautiful and heart-warming (:
I'm interested to see what happens with koyama and yamapi.
Can't wait for more!!!!!

[yukinonamida]

:D I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

They have a lot of things to overcome. :/

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment :D

[snow_meow]

Now I get it why Kei is so upset with Pi.
They really need to work things out.

I am glad that Ryo and Shige finally got to working things out with their powers so that they could be together. I am so happy that Ryo didn't cheat on Shige or moved on with his file. It would have been such a pity.

[yukinonamida]

He did have a good reason to be upset. And yeah, they do. D:

Cheating on Shige would be the worst thing he could do, especially after everything they've been through and Shige gave up so much for him.

[yukinonamida]

Exclamation points are always good :D

*blush* I originally planned to have it more descriptive but it didn't flow. That, and I fail horribly at it. :3