Snow and Ash - Chapter 8 Parts 2&3

Oct 06, 2009 14:01

Present Day:

Shige:

I feel the cold sea breeze tickle my face. I hear the calming sound of the water. I watch as Koyama flips open a lighter and stares at the glow of the flame.

“I wonder if it’s possible to renew a love that is fading,” he says and flips the lighter shut.

Is it? Or is it as hopeless as trying to save a struggling flame in ( Read more... )

-snow and ash

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2morrow_is_now October 6 2009, 20:21:32 UTC
i'm glad shige is getting better.
what exactly happened to keii and pi? whatever it was, they need to figure it out.
and ryo, he isn't cheating on shige, is he? because shige will know. very soon. and ryo belongs to shige, period.

anyway, please update soon!
&hearts

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yukinonamida October 6 2009, 20:33:27 UTC
Something happened before they left for the past that was the last straw. I'll clear it up more next chapter when the family is reunited.

It seems like that, and there is quite a sticky situation going on but no, he's not. Not really, anyway.

I will try ^^; This chapter was rough, but I think the next ones will be easier to write

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2morrow_is_now October 7 2009, 08:11:26 UTC
about keii and pi, that much i somehow figured.

and just as long as ryo-chan isn't cheating then it might be fine!

well, you did good work still. as always xD

&hearts

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mahalkita57 October 7 2009, 01:15:21 UTC
Yay an update! :)
Like always, it was amazing yet heartbreaking at the same time.
I can't wait for more!

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yukinonamida October 7 2009, 11:10:14 UTC
Thank you ^^ I am glad you enjoyed it ;) the next chapter won't take as long

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miss_jelly October 7 2009, 03:00:17 UTC
D: who the hell is Ryo talking to? (typical girly reaction XD)
Hmm... It has to be something big if he's able to keep it from Shige... And yay for Shige getting things under control, a bit :) Not yay if Ryo's having some secret tryst :\ I also hope Koyama and Pi can get things worked out...

...god, I'm so curious to see who called Ryo! had to be a girl... :{ guh, curiosity is a traight I should learn to ignore

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yukinonamida October 7 2009, 11:16:22 UTC
LOL @ your icon.

She will be revealed next chapter but the fact that Ryo didn't leave means something ;)

thanks for reading <3 I'll try to get the next chapter out soon so you don't have to be curious anymore.

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sheichan18 October 7 2009, 06:50:33 UTC
*jaw drops*

you updated! yaay~

i do hope the last part doesn't indicate anything,, shige's in too much pain already and being cheated on won't help him at all.. XDD..

nice chappy! ^_^

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yukinonamida October 7 2009, 11:20:56 UTC
*picks it back up for you*

I've already killed Shige enough don't worry too much. At least for right now :3

thank you <3 I was worried about this one

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yukinonamida October 7 2009, 11:24:19 UTC
:) thank you~

He's not stupid and you're right - he wouldn't do anything to hurt Shige.

Lol @ that last part. Very true xD

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