The Boy Who Painted… - Chapter 4

[yukimahou]

Ueda x Kame

Comments

[patrycja444d]

It's a slow fic but it's kind of... fascinating. Somehow I really like the slow pace in it. It makes the story more mysterious and interesting. I like it. :) I will wait for more.

[yukimahou]

originally it wasn't going to be a slow fic, but in the end, it just kinda developed like that... I've been looking over my story plan and I think this might be one of the longest I will write :S
I'm glad you'll wait for more ^.^ It's kinda hard to write a lot quickly with this one cause of work and such

Thanks for reading :)

[ladyc2]

Poor Kame - he sound not a very good place mentally, what with the nightmares and getting lost in the painting and the creepy cat.

Nice to see how Ueda ended up off the farm - the temple didn't sound very pleasant, I'm glad they kicked him out.

Looking forward to seeing how you bring all the different elements together.

[yukimahou]

Sorry >.< I have this strange habit to torture my characters

I'm interested to know why you think that the second story is Ueda, I haven't mentioned who it is yet :3

Thanks for reading, I'm trying to write up the rest quickly, but work is getting in the way

[ladyc2]

Now that you mention it, I don't really know why I assume it's Ueda, I just did Lol! It seems a bit like him, in that he focuses on what he likes and he's easily distracted from stuff that doesn't interest him.

And I like to speculate on where things in fics are going.
If it's not him, I'll get a surprise later when he really does show up - so it's all good :)

[dori_liv]

The cats are so creepy.
The lady is somehow entrancing.
The whole thing is just so mysterious.

It was kinda cute how Kame went to fetch Koyama to save him from the cat. But poor tortured Kame - haunted by things he almost knows but at the same time really has no idea about.
Like ladyc2, I naturally assumed the second story was Ueda. I'll get a big shock if it's revealed that it isn't xD