Eternally Yours - Chapter 5

[yukimahou]

RyOkura (side NishiKato)
editsnail's request
Multichapter!
Rating: PG
Summary: Okura left the hotel where they all worked years ago, claiming that their newest vampire, Abigail, was destroying their lifestyle. Ryo feels broken at him leaving and after a while decides its time to find Okura again. But years tick by and Okura is  no where to be found. Ryo is

Comments

[effi_g]

*flails* OMG!! SPOT!!!!! *runs off to read*

[effi_g]

omg my heart just shattered, I swear it did.
I should be thrilled that Nishikato remain..... but....... a broken ryo-chan........... *tears welling up*

*sighs* poor dear. I just...... *sighs again*

Tegoshi and ohkura!!! and Ohkura!!! How!! why would he be so cold! even if it wasn't intentional, it hurts. You must hurt even more, I know how you invest in your characters *hugs* Your writing is fantastic as always.

[yukimahou]

*hugs*!!!!

I don't know what happened... this story kinda just started to write itself... and having "oh okura how I missed you" "oh ryo, I missed you too, I see you are still so small" "Dont call me small!" "I'm just glad you still fit in my arms" kinda reunion just didnt feel write...

hence a tragedy was born...

and hee hee I actually don't feel that bad... it hurts, but I know more, more than all the characters (well maybe not shige, I dont know anything about law)

[effi_g]

Yeah you probably would have lost me if you'd had a reuinion like that. Real life is messy, so fics should have realistic messy elements. I still like a happy ending, but the struggle to get ther has to be real. Me thinks anyways. Angsty ryo is love. And doting Shige is *sigh* Sometimes I forget just how much I love the NishiKato pairing.

also........ keep staring at your icon, i can't help it!!! it's so distracting!!! so delicious *drools*

[gizmoy]

whaa.... why is this so sad...
*sniff* couldn't you just let them live happily ever after... I don't like to see Ryo broken like this.
I really hope Ohkura is going to go after him now... Ryo deserves it~

Thank you so much for this story, I'm already waiting for the next chapter.

[yukimahou]

Thanks for reading, hope I didn't upset you too much, but theres a lot more still to come :)

[quaint_stories]

I wondered how I had missed this fic from it's start but then I realised that the NishiKato pairing was only added to the paring during this chapter and so I read it all in one go~

I like it much... it's a good pace and good characters and relationships... and I'm now really into it, being that I seem to have caught on when the NishiKato story line is only now starting ^^

I'll be looking out for more updates XD

[yukimahou]

Wah, thank you for reading it :)