Chasing butterflies, Chapter 15, ReitaxAoi, RukixNi~ya

[yukigafuru]

Title: Chasing butterflies

Author: yukigafuru
Rating: PG-15 for now (will be adult)
Chapter: 15/?
Pairings: Aoi/Reita, RukixNi~ya
Bands: Gazette
Warnings: non-graphic underage consensual sex
Genre: angst, romance

Summary: Life is short. You try to catch it and it slips through your fingers. Life is also beautiful. It astounds you at every step. And it only

Comments

[jrock_miso]

Let me just say I don't know how it's all going to end (that's in your hands)

But I'm REALLLLY rooting for Reita going into Remission

& hoping for a good outcome for Ni~ya & Ruki

[yukigafuru]

And I'm forever grateful you trust me to come up with a good one. Rooting for that too. +-+
Thank you. Hope you like the next one.

[yukigafuru]

Thank you very much. I'm glad you thought so.
Squishes.

[sarky_chepooka]

Pfft I don't like this

I LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!

Omg I can't even.... I absolutely love the way you described the ceremony, I could picture it SO clearly and it was truly beautiful. The last part of this chapter had this ethereal quality to it that I think was really fitting. Instead of being over-the-top romantic and grandiose (as wedding-fics usually are), it was so simple and full of honest emotion.

They haven't exactly had an easy beginning to their relationship, and it was so nice that they finally got to have a "happy moment" - even if the knowledge that Aoi might not have Reita for very long is always looming in the background, and kinda makes me feel that the more romantic their relationship is, the more heartbreaking it is too.

And I think the way you ended it was lovely (not that I'm not looking forward to more graphic scenes ;D).

Aoi and Reita are just so sweet together, and this chapter has me smiling like a fool. Ahh I feel all warm inside xD Thank you so much for the update <3

[yukigafuru]

And thank you so much for the comment. It makes all the days till I finally finish the next one better.
I'm really glad you thought that about the wedding. To me, a grandiose one would just have been false. They're not like that. I'm really glad you saw it that way because me personally, I'm a bit against all the pomp normal weddings bring, so sometimes that slips in the fic.
The balance between sadness and romance is actually a very hard one to keep and I'm thrilled you feel I'm doing it just fine. I'm such a fluff person that it's hard to write the angst part, so it always reassures me when it gets done right.
Many thanks you and many squishes.
Bunnies bowing

[rosswen91]

i'm gonna cryy'
they are just perfect together!
pleease reite hold onto your life, never give up!
i love this story so much! it's touching my heart!
thank for writing!

[yukigafuru]

And thank you for reading and commenting every time.
It helps loads with the writing, I swear.
They are perfect, aren't they. I'm trying to make them just a bit short of perfect, but somehow not sure I'm getting that. Oh well, I'll just do that with the other pairings, maybe. If the bunnies don't rebel. LOL
Thank you again and many squishes

[larakaka]

This chapter was perfect!!
I loved how you described the two best friends again. And Uruha as makeup artist is just ideal. ^^
The wedding was really sweet, but what had touched me the most was Aoi´s speech!! It was perfect and I really admire you for being able to write something like that.
And I liked the sweet ending! I really think anything more would have ruined the sweet moment.

Thank you for the update. ♥

[yukigafuru]

Thank you for your insightful comment. I really loved that you agreed with the part with Uruha and Reita since I wanted that to not be just a filler, but a bit of character study. I'm glad it seems it turned out right.
Aoi's speech, like Reita's too, was very personal. Love declarations always are and I'm glad I managed to move you with it.
Thank you for reading and commenting. I hope you'll like the next chapter too.
Squishes