A Perfect Lie - 1/1

[yuka_yui]

Tittle: A Perfect Lie - 1/1
Word Count: 179. Drabble.
Rating: R
Summary: She always have a question, but not always a answer
Autor's Nothes: The firt fic on english. Sorry for wrong words, ideas, etc.

A Perfect Lie

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“I’m over House”

She always think in the future. Maybe, she ever think in her future.

Her feets are moving around circles, with her hands

Comments

[newfoundlover]

I like your writing, but find yourself a pretty little beta and he/she will fix the grammatical errors :) Eres de España? ;)

[yuka_yui]

No, española no, Chile. Thank's :D, i'll find a beta.

[newfoundlover]

Ehehe, bueno :)

[fairyfloss_love]

Really good little drabble.

But I really think you should look for a beta, it makes it easier to read. :)

[yuka_yui]

Thaaaaaaaaaanks!

BETA BETA BETA BETA, i'm looking for a betaaaaa!

[yuka_yui]

Es una cosa bastante rara Santiago/Salamanca... me podrías betear?? ^^

[katakombs]

Saying it's a perfect lie is very good because it's all about her lying to herself.

Try posting on the board asking for a beta. I didn't get all of the nuance you wanted to put in because sometimes it's the wrong word or the wrong tense

[yuka_yui]

*Blush* Thanks a lot, i'm so glad with your comment.

[styxinen]

I really liked this, but I agree that a beta would really make this have the punch it needs.

(No worries though. I know people who can't write this well and English is their native language. *grin*)

[yuka_yui]

Lol. I work with my new beta *ejem, ejem* and I want have a progress with "this".

Thaaaaaaanks!

[sandra_lara]

OMS, dios mio palmy-pooh ha crecido y ya me escribe el hameron en ingles. Vaya peaso de drabble, ya sabes lo que pienso de tus fics, son magnificos y especiales como tu cielo!!!

[yuka_yui]

Creciiiiii! xD. Yay, en realidad nada, pero le hago el esfuerzo.

Comentarios como los tuyos siempre me hacen querer mejorar, un besazo cieloooo!!