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Not The World's Greatest Babysitters Commentary Part One

Nov 05, 2007 23:23

So last night I was reading one of my old fics because I got a review for it. A five year old fic. :p And I realized, looking back, that it was full of an ABSURD amount of innuendo. And accidental foreshadowing. :p Also, it's just really weird looking at the first fic I ever posted. :p

So I decided it would be fun to do a commentary!

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star wars, fanfiction

Comments 5

anglophile_rat November 6 2007, 18:06:10 UTC

No, I'm not sure what Anakin was doing. Do you REALLY want to know?

Oh, I know. He was playing in the water. Having seen, firsthand the power of a three year old playing in a sink while supervised, I can imagine what a 3yo WITHOUT supervision could do.

Scary.

yubsie November 7 2007, 01:16:37 UTC

Oh, I'm sure he was playing in the water. It's the footprints that trouble me. :p

anglophile_rat November 7 2007, 16:51:30 UTC

I was a 2yo preschool teacher for 4 years. I KNOW how those footprints happend. That may be why nothing much scares me. ;p

yubsie November 7 2007, 17:09:41 UTC

Oh, I believe it. I worked in a daycare for a WEEK and the things I saw...

And there is just nothing scarier than trying to cross an icy street with a dozen three year olds. :p

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yubsie November 7 2007, 22:56:35 UTC

Well, the first thing I ever posted. I have some truly ghastly original stuff hiding somewhere, never to see the light of day in that form. :p This one I actually quite like, it just has some stylistic things that make me cringe now. Plus accidental innuendo and wtf, Jacen wasn't a Sith when I wrote this. :p

Aww, thanks.