Example of a Good Hook

[ysabetwordsmith]

gumnut has posted a snippet of writing that brilliantly demonstrates the "hook" at the beginning of a story, which is what grabs a reader's attention so they'll keep reading what you wrote. Tack this to your wall and label it "Like This."

Comments

[arielstarshadow]

Wow - you're right.

[browngirl]

I'm not strong enough to tape that to my computer: two days of three, I'd say, "I can't equal that" and give up.

But I am going to remember it. *rereads about fifty times*