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Ever-Evolving Formula

Sep 26, 2011 22:07

Title: Ever-Evolving Formula
Fandom: Aimiya (Arashi RPS)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, AU
Word Count: 2,657
Summary: Nino and Aiba spend their entire lives marking the things important to them.
Notes: Remix of Painting by lover_youshould for jentfic_remix Cycle 7, originally posted here. Set in the AU where Aimiya aren't married. This is about as loose as remixes get, but ( Read more... )

fan: aimiya (arashi rps), fic: au, fic: oneshot, fic: exchange

Comments 6

i_am_zan September 27 2011, 05:19:05 UTC

This is so very very very beautiful. (Not a pairing I usually read, but ...) It's so very well written, of which there seems to be a dearth of these days.
And it flows, flows like breathing naturally. So very beautiful. Thank you ... and yes I do remember the original too.

^_^ Wonderful. Simply wonderful!

ltgmars October 16 2011, 20:17:23 UTC

Ahh, wow, what a nice comment! Getting the flow right is definitely something I work on, so I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks so much for reading! ♥

rinalin September 28 2011, 01:15:57 UTC

Brilliant and beautiful. The pace was excellent and they just fit so well here together, in this.

ltgmars October 16 2011, 20:22:52 UTC

Ah, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!

jellybean6972 September 29 2011, 15:14:11 UTC

Wah~ I'm freaking flailing over here! So beautiful and it feels so natural. It's so them. I think that your love for the original does come through. Thanks for sharing :D

ltgmars October 16 2011, 20:25:33 UTC

I really love how natural Aimiya can be together, so I'm glad I got that to work in the story. Thanks for reading! :D