Disambiguation

[ltgmars]

Title: Disambiguation
Fandom: Arashi (Sho, Nino, Jun)-centric, with cameos by Kanjani8 (Maru and Yoko)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Drama/Suspense, AU
Word Count: 9,978
Summary: Nino is acting suspicious. Sho needs to figure out why. (Cop drama AU.)
Warnings: Coma, death, some blood. Not a happy story.
Notes: Written for moogle_tey during je_squickfic 2010, originally posted

Comments

[ltgmars]

:( I'm sorry. (But thanks for reading!)

[jamasunda]

DDDDDDDDDDDDD:

Thank you for murdering my heart *cries*

Loved it ♥♥

[ltgmars]

Ahaha I don't know how to react to this. "Thank you--" :D :D "-- for murdering my heart" D: D: ohgod what have I done?

Glad you liked it. ♥

[ma_i_do_a_ri]

WOW.

and that's an understatement.

this is really an incredible piece~ i never expected it to turn out as it did xD it was one heck of a ride. schizophrenia... incredible. simply incredible. it was really well written and constructed too and that made it all the more better xD

shall be now stalking your works 8D

WOW. (yeah, i should shut up now xD)

[ltgmars]

Ahh, I'm glad you liked it! Getting the schizophrenia to fit logically (and realistically) was a big part of this for me, so I'm glad it worked. Thanks for reading!

[calerine]

This is every bit of amazing and I have to tell you why even though I - am pretty much incoherent and there is an exam I need to study for right now and just - wow.

This piece is goregous and refined and elegant in its flow and your writing. It shows so much of skill you have as not so much of a ficcer than a writer and I think that is incredibly incredibly - just rare. (There is not much of this in fandom is what I'm trying to say.) I'm completely in awe witht the way you handled the plot and how you paid attention to every single detail. I can't get my head around how you are able to do that. I'm in awe with the way you lead the reader on in Part One; how you play us out, leading us past every single damn possibility and then telling us, actually every single premise of detail this fic stands on is non-existent. It makes me want to cry, and just. I love how you distract us with every other thing but Nino's lack of being around. I love every scene that leads up to this realisation and how even at the end, I could even successfully

[ltgmars]

Hahhh, I don't know what to do with this comment. (I'm so awkward, I'm sorry.)

Thank you for reading! I'm glad that you seemed to like it so much! ♥

[tsutsumi]

This was just fantastic.
I have no words for this.
*bows*

[ltgmars]

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked it. :D