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yourpalkara

We Came Along This Road

Nov 06, 2011 17:02

Title: We Came Along This Road
Author: yourpalkara
Pairing/characters: Sam, Dean (gen)
Rating: PG
Word count: 462
Spoilers: some for 7x05
Summary: The Winchesters' lives look better in reverse.
Notes: This was inspired by Jonathan Safran Foer’s “Extremely Loud and Incredibly Close” which everyone should read!!!!

( there never was no other on whom i could depend )

fic, spn

Comments 55

monicawoe November 7 2011, 00:46:57 UTC

Oh wow. This is just lovely. Painful, but lovely.

yourpalkara November 10 2011, 07:20:32 UTC

thank you, i'm glad you thought so!

i_speak_tongue November 7 2011, 01:00:52 UTC

Utterly. Heartbreaking.

yourpalkara November 10 2011, 07:36:42 UTC

thank you!

etoile444 November 7 2011, 01:22:30 UTC

What a great and gorgeous job you did with this!!!!!

yourpalkara November 10 2011, 07:22:41 UTC

thank you so much!!

desertport November 7 2011, 01:32:35 UTC

This brings a tear to my eye. Sam being wistful and imagining a little joy and relief, back, back into a time of innocence and safety. A lot of beautiful imagery here, but I like this the best: Jessica would’ve fallen from the ceiling and into Sam’s arms. Thank you for sharing this!

yourpalkara November 10 2011, 07:24:19 UTC

i think that'd probably have to be my favorite line too so i'm glad you liked it, and thank you!

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yourpalkara November 10 2011, 07:24:59 UTC

thanks, man